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Doing research with Internet sources Dear all, could you check and correct my essay? It is critically important that scientists improve the society with their researches. It is important and complicated work. Therefore, a lot of people sagest that to make a good project scientists have to use paper sources such as books. Personally, I believe this is not necessary, good research may be made with Internet sources. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, the Internet has a significant advantage. It is easier to find and use information. Person doesn’t need to search books in libraries or their fellows. In addition, all paper sources exist in the network. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I make a research in quantum computations. Therefore, I need to find and study a number of articles. The Internet allows to search quickly. Another benefit is that one can communicate with the researchers in simple way, just to write on their emails. Furthermore, the online sources allows to use up-to-date works. To print book or research in the magazine and distribute it one have to spend a lot of time. Therefore, sometimes people don’t read it in time. For instance, I knew about quantum supremacy made by Google team earlier than I saw the paper article. The time between these two events was about a month. During this time one can understand a research, think about it. Furthermore, the person also is able to start their own work in this field of science. In conclusion, I strongly believe that Internet sources of scientific articles have a number of benefits. This is because they provide access to all research. One can easy to communicate with a researcher. Also, this access is up-to-date. People don’t need to wait for the work being printed.

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Doing research with Internet sources

Dear all, could you check and correct my essay?

It is critically important that scientists improve the society with their researches. It is important and complicated work. Therefore, a lot of people sagest suggest that to make a good project scientists have to use paper sources such as books. Personally, I believe this is not necessary,. Good research may be made with using Internet sources. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, the Internet has a significant advantage. It is easier to find and use information. Person doesn’t You don't need to search books in libraries or their fellows similar. In addition, all paper sources exist in the network/on the internet. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I make a research in quantum computations. Therefore, I need to find and study a number of articles. The Internet allows me to search quickly. Another benefit is that one can communicate with the researchers in simple way, just to write on their using emails.

Furthermore, the online sources allows you to use up-to-date works. To print a book or research in the a magazine and distribute it one have to spend takes a lot of time. Therefore, sometimes people don’t read it in time. For instance, I knew about quantum supremacy achieved made by the Google team earlier than before I saw the paper article. The time between these two events was about a month. During this time one can gain an understanding a of the research, and take time to think about it. Furthermore, the person also is able to you can start their your own work in this field of science.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that Internet sources of scientific articles have a number of benefits. This is because they provide access to all researchers, and one can easily to communicate with a researcher. Also, this access is up-to-date. People don’t need to wait for the work being to be printed.

A well worded essay, well done :)

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