Could you please check my writing? (part 2)
It's just a simple synopsis of a few chapters from Satori by Don Winslow for my next lesson.
Chapter 123.
Nicholai met with the banker.
Nicholai demanded the access to Yuri Voroshenin's safety deposit box.
The banker refused.
Then Nicholai blackmailed and threatened him with the information that De Lhandes'd given him.
The banker gave him the access.
Nicholai got a lot of stocks and securities and codes to other Voroshenin's safety deposit boxes.
But more importantly, Nicholai got a few different passports.
Then Nicholai left the bank.
Chapter 124.
Diamond met with all headmen of L'Union Corse.
He said that Michel Guibert was an asset of an American anti-narcotic union and Haverford was his handler.
L'Union Corse was furios.
They arranged assassinations.
For Haverford it should look like a robbery.
For Nicholai they decided to call a special trained killer named Cobra.
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Could you please check my writing? (part 2)
It's just a simple synopsis of a few chapters from Satori by Don Winslow for my next lesson.
Chapter 123.
Nicholai met with the banker.
Nicholai demanded the access to Yuri Voroshenin's safety deposit box.
The banker refused.
Then Nicholai blackmailed and threatened him with the information that De Lhandes'd given him.
The banker gave him the access.
Nicholai got a lot of stocks, and securities, and codes to other Voroshenin's other safety deposit boxes.
But more importantly, Nicholai got a few different passports.
Then Nicholai left the bank.
Chapter 124.
Diamond met with all headmen of L'Union Corse.
He said that Michel Guibert was an asset of an American anti-narcotic union and Haverford was his handler.
L'Union Corse was furios.
They arranged assassinations.
For Haverford it should look like a robbery.
For Nicholai they decided to call a special trained killer named Cobra.
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