Guys, please check my essay about Harry Potter
Harry Potter was highly unusual boy because of the many reasons. He was a wizard and grew up completely ignoring it. Although he lost his parents and has been living with quite unfriendly relatives - his dead mom's sister brought him up - he stayed kind and generous.
He met his thirteenth birthday without any proper present, even a birthday cart. But this year was different. His best friends, Ron and Hermione, found the way to send him something very warmth and valuable.
Ron sent him a Pocket Sneackoscope from his Egypt traveling, it was what looked like a miniature glass spinning top. If there is something unworthy around the owner, it's supposed to light up and spin.
Hermione presented Harry a Broomstick Service Kit, which was very nice - Harry was a huge fan of Quidditch and played for the House team.
There was another gift from Hogwarts gamekeeper Hagrid - the Monster book of Monsters. And there were also three birthday cards with touching wishes.
In my opinion, the most useful present was from Hermione. It is nessessary for the professional player to maintain the quality of the equipment. If I were a friend of Harry, I would present him a birthday cake. I believe that it creates a holiday cheer.
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Guys, please check my essay about Harry Potter
Harry Potter was a highly unusual boy because of the for many reasons. He was a wizard and grew up completely ignoring without knowing it. Although he lost his parents and had been living with quite unfriendly relatives - his dead mom's sister brought him up - he stayed remained kind and generous.
Ron sent him a Pocket Sneackoscope from his travels in Egypt traveling, . It was what looked like a miniature glass spinning top. If there is was something unworthy around untrustworthy near the owner, it's supposed to it would light up and spin.
Hermione presented Harry with a Broomstick Service Kit, which was very nice - Harry was a huge fan of Quidditch and played for the House team.
There was another gift from Hogwarts gamekeeper Hagrid - the Monster book of Monsters. And There were also three birthday cards with touching kind wishes. Try not to start sentences with 'And'.
In my opinion, the most useful present was from Hermione. It is necessary (I often spell this word wrong too!) for the professional player to maintain the quality of their/his/her equipment. If I were a friend of Harry, I would present him with a birthday cake. I believe that it creates a holiday cheer. a cake cheers up anyone's birthday. Holiday is the wrong word, because a birthday is not regarded as a holiday.
A good essay about one of my favourite characters. Well done :)
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