Harry Potter's gifts
When Harry Potter was thirteen years old his friends gived him the wonderful gifts for his birthday. Ron made the Pocket Sneakoscope. It was a useful thing which help to detect someone untrustworthy. Hermione presented Broomstick Servicing Kit to Harry. There was a lot of things to care for the broomstick in the kit. The Monster Book of Monsters was gived by Hagrid. It was the strange magic book which Harry could use on the lessons in Hogwarts. I think, Hermione's gift was the best for Harry because Harry loved to fly on a broomstick. If I could give a present to Harry Potter I would give him magic glasses that don't brake. I think this glasses would was useful to him.
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Harry Potter's gifts (I love Harry Potter :D )
When Harry Potter was thirteen years old, his friends gave him the wonderful gifts for his birthday. Ron gave the Pocket Sneakoscope. It was a useful thing, which helped to detect someone untrustworthy. Hermione presented a Broomstick Servicing Kit to Harry. There were a lot of things to care for the broomstick in the kit. The Monster Book of Monsters was given by Hagrid. It was a strange magical book that Harry could use in the lessons at Hogwarts. I think, Hermione's gift was the best for Harry, because Harry loved to fly on a broomstick. If I could give a present to Harry Potter, I would give him magic glasses that don't break. I think these glasses would be useful to him.
(In my experience "which" and "that" serve almost the same function. "Which" is usually used after a comma, which separates thoughts within a long sentence. VS "That" is used in sentences that need a little more description")
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