Hi, could you check these sentences, please?
1) They admitted that the scheme that they were sticking to all the season wasn't efficient enough.
2) The stream was mostly shallow but nonetheless it was quite difficult to cross it.
3) The club has scouts operating all over the world but the most amount of players are signed in Brazil.
4) I had no idea that it's possible to adjust this chair.
5) He carried a huge mound of earth to our yard and it's been lying there for several months.
6) Some people don't distinguish different types of mushroom that can lead to poisoning.
7) He has to deal with a lot of dumb clients at work.
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1) They admitted that the scheme that they stuck were sticking to with all the season wasn't efficient enough.
2) The stream was mostly shallow, but nonetheless it was quite difficult to cross it.
3) The club has scouts operating all over the world, but the most amount of players are signed in Brazil.
4) I had no idea that it's possible to adjust this chair.
5) He carried a huge mound of earth to our yard, and it's been lying there for several months.
6) Some people don't distinguish between different types of mushrooms that can lead to poisoning.
7) He has to deal with a lot of dumb clients at work.
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Hi, could you check these sentences, please?
1) They admitted that the scheme that they were sticking to the entire season wasn't efficient enough.
2) The stream was mostly shallow but nonetheless it was quite difficult to cross it. <--- This is fine. Also, the "it" on the end is optional. It works either way.
3) The club has scouts operating all over the world but the largest amount of players are signed in Brazil.
You could also say:
The club has scouts operating all over the world but most of the players are signed in Brazil.
4) I had no idea that it's possible to adjust this chair.
5) He carried a huge mound of earth to our yard and it's been lying there for several months.
6) Some people don't distinguish different types of mushroom that can lead to poisoning.
There are a couple ways you could say this.
Some people can't distinguish different types of mushroom that can lead to poisoning.
or maybe
Some people don't distinguish different types of mushroom and that can lead to poisoning.
7) He has to deal with a lot of dumb clients at work.
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Hi, could you check these sentences, please?
1) They admitted that the scheme that they were sticking to all the season wasn't efficient enough.
2) The stream was mostly shallow but nonetheless it was quite difficult to cross it. (This is not necessarily wrong but it sounds more natural omitted.)
3) The club has scouts operating all over the world, but the most amount of players are signed in Brazil. (You could also say: but most of the players are signed in Brazil.)
4) I had no idea that it's possible to adjust this chair.
5) He carried a huge mound of earth to our yard and it's been lying there for several months.
6) Some people don't distinguish different types of mushroom that can lead to poisoning.
7) He has to deal with a lot of dumb clients at work.
Nice work!
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