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speaking practice 1 This is a practice for a speaking exam. I'm glad if you point out mistakes colloquially as well as dramatically. >_< Thesis: Is society taking the issue of fake news seriously enough? Thanks to developments in information technology, people have become much easier to send and receive information than ever before. However, as the information people handle increases, the concern about its credibility also grows. Although Some people insist that they recognize the danger of fake news enough, I do believe that the effect of information is too significant to deal with in today's society. First of all, it is incredibly difficult to judge whether the information is real or not. While society becomes a glut of information, people tend to like smaller data in an article. Mass media also have limited time to cover in their program. This means that the information we get is often edited by the coverages to get attention. Moreover, an increasing number of people who send information through social media makes this problem worsen. People today tend to spread information from their friends with little caring about its credibility. It is often cases that they contribute to the spread of fake news unknowingly. Finally, fake news has a major impact on both seniors and younger generations. ( I found that I didn't finish this entry until the end.) Despite the fraud alert by governments or media, the number of elderly victims of communicative fraud is increasing. Also, younger people who lack judgment from knowledge and experience are easy targets of cybercrimes. In these ways, people apparently seem to have been well known about the danger of fake news, however, they haven't understood its potential risks. thank you for reading this. >_<

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speaking practice 1

This is a practice for a speaking exam.
I'm glad if you point out mistakes colloquially as well as dramatically. >_<

Thesis: Is society taking the issue of fake news seriously enough?

Thanks to developments in information technology, people have become MORE ABLE to send and receive information than ever before.
However, as the information THAT people handle increases, the concern about its credibility also grows.
Although Some people insist that they recognize the danger of fake NEWS, I do believe that the effect of information is too significant to deal with in today's society.

First of all, it is incredibly difficult to judge whether the information is real or not. While society becomes a GLUTTON of information, people tend to like LESS data in an article. Mass media also HAS limited time to cover INFORMATION in their program. This means that the information we get is often edited by the WRITERS to get attention.

Moreover, an increasing number of people who send information through social media MAKE this problem WORSE.
People today tend to spread information THAT THEY RECEIVE FROM their friends with little REGARD TO its credibility.
It is often THE CASE that they contribute to the spread of fake news unknowingly.

Finally, fake news has a major impact on both seniors and younger generations.

thank you for reading this. >_<

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