Diary
I didn't do much today.Just got up at seven this morning.After breakfast,I washed my clothes.Because I like playing jigsaw puzzle,so I played it today.I think it's good for the brain,can makes our brain more activite and concentrated.And for me,it‘ interesting alone at home to kill time.we usually look the smart phone and computer,it's bad for our eyes.So it very suit, quiet to play to relax..When finished,very fulfilling.At night,I watched TV.Such a quiet day passed.
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Diary
I didn't do much today. I got up at seven this morning. After breakfast, I washed my clothes. Because I like playing jigsaw puzzles, I worked on one today. I think puzzles are good for the brain; they can make our brain concentrate more and be more active. For me, it makes being at home alone more interesting. I usually look at the smart phone and computer, but it's bad for my eyes. But, a puzzle is very suitable for me, and it relaxes me. When I am finished, I feel very fulfilled. Tonight I watched TV. I enjoyed this quiet day.
Home alone= I, not we
2 Spaces after periods, one space after commas
Once you begin in the past, careful of when you change to the present. I went by your first sentence. "Didn't, got up, washed, worked-" great job!
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Diary
I have not done didn't do much today.Just Have just got up at seven this morning. After breakfast,I have washed my clothes. Because I like playing jigsaw puzzle,so I have played it today.I think it's good for the brain,can makes make our brain more activite and concentrated. And for me,it‘s interesting when you are home alone alone at home to kill time. We usually look the smartphone and computer. It's bad for our eyes.So it very suits, quiet to play to and relax..When finished,very fulfilling. At night,I have watched TV. Such a quiet day have passed.
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