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I made Kimchi I'm writing about Kimchi that I made recently because it came out very yummy. I made it quite a few times in the past but I was never been successful. Not this time, I followed a real Korean homemade recipe quite accurately and finally it was successful! Even though I like Kimchi so much, I have to be very careful when to eat, because it has lots garlic in it,. So before when I see someone, I try not to eat Kimchi too much.

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I made Kimchi

I'm writing about the Kimchi that I made recently because it came out very yummy.
I have made it quite a few times in the past but I was never been successful. But this time, I followed a real Korean homemade recipe (no correction, but I wanted to note a possibility - "to the letter" "I followed a real Korean homemade recipe to the letter" its an idiom that works well here and just means following something meticulously) quite accurately and finally it was successful!

Even though I like Kimchi so much, I have to be very careful when to eat it, because it has lots garlic in it,. So when I am going to see/meet with someone, I try not to eat Kimchi too much.

I have been thinking of making Kimchi as well. Well-done with the notebook entry.
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I made Kimchi

  1. I'm writing about kimchi that I made recently because it came out very yummy. (Normally, in English, we don't capitalize the names of food)
  2. I made it a few times in the past but I have never been successful. (I don't think the word "quite" is necessary here. You can have "I have been been successful" or "I was never successful" but "I was never been successful is incorrect)
  3. Not this time, I followed a real Korean homemade recipe quite accurately and finally it was successful!

Even though I like kimchi very much, I have to be very careful when eating it, because it has a lot of garlic. So before I see someone, I try not to eat too much kimchi.

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