First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm LiangNi ,my English name is Annie,a 30-year-old,single Chinese woman.Now I live in Xi'an, a capital city in the north west of China,where The 41st International Horticultural Exposition is conducted.I work as a consultant for early childhood education in a school.concretely,I introduce the early childhood class to babies' parents and enroll new family to join our school . I love this job beacuse of the interest in early childhood education,althoug I don't have a baby now. why? Beacuse, I think the early childhood is the most crucial period for a person. Besides, I have another hobby - learning English. So I usually read English paper, listen to VOA ,BBC. watch 'The Desperate Housewife', and just now I registered the membership,then I meet you here. Here I am!Nice to meet you!:) 31st,Aug,2011.
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First notebook entry: Introducing Myself
I'm Liang Ni, a 30-year-old single Chinese woman. My English name is Annie, a 30-year-old, single Chinese woman. Now I live in Xi'an, a provincial capital city in the northwest of China, where the 41st International Horticultural Exposition is being conducted. I work as a consultant for early childhood education in a school. Specificallyconcretely, I introduce the early childhood class to babies' parents and enroll new families to joining our school. I love this job beacuse because of the interest in early childhood education, although I don't have a baby now. Why? Beacuse It is because , I think the early childhood is the most crucial period for a person. Besides, I have another hobby - learning English. So I usually read English papers, listen to the VOA, BBC, or watch 'The Desperate Housewife Housewives'. And just now I registered here the membership, then I meet met you here. Here I am! Nice to meet you! :) 31 st,Aug, 2011
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Thank you very much! I will correct it.:)
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I love this job beacuse of the interest in early childhood education,althoug I don't have a baby now.
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I love this job because of my interest in Early Childhood Education, although, I don't have a baby yet.
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