You can’t say scandals are useful.
You can’t say scandals are useful. I think when these breaks, People primarily not focus on the problems, but look at the embarrassment, bad mood and anxiety. Firstly, people will suffer a setback of these overwhelming feelings, maybe after that, several persons will think deeply and begin to realize the significant problems, but the majority not. Arousal is of subjective initiative, even speakers or reformers can never help you to arouse.
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You can’t say scandals are useful.
You can’t say scandals are useful. I think when these scandals breaks, People primarily not focus don't focus primarily on the problems, but look at on the embarrassment, bad mood feelings and anxiety. Firstly, people will suffer a setback because of these overwhelming feelings, maybe after that, several persons some people will think deeply and begin to realize understand the significant problems, but the majority will not. Arousal is of subjective initiative, even speakers or reformers can never help you to arouse.
Agreement:
"when these scandals breaks" - make sure you use the correct verb form for singular and plural subjects; 'I break, you break, he/she/it breaks, we break, they break'.
Word Order:
"People primarily not focus don't focus primarily on the problems" - use 'don't' to negate a verb. Adverbs such as 'primarily' usually come after a negative verb.
Word Choice:
"several persons some people" - we can say 'several persons' in the context of a news or police report, for example "several persons have been implicated in this scandal", but in most situations it's better to say 'some people'.
Unclear Meaning:
"Arousal is of subjective initiative, even speakers or reformers can never help you to arouse." - I'm not sure what this sentence means, could you explain it a bit more?
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