Pruning Roses
It's the end of July, the middle of winter in Australia. It's the time to prune roses in the yard. My friend doesn't sound like a big fan of pruning. I haven't done that before. So I asked her to show me how to do it so I could help.
The pruning was exciting, nervous and spikkkky!!! Here're the things I learned about pruning roses. First, find a bud that looks thriving in a low position of a brunch. Next, make a cut 1-2cm above the bud. Done! It doesn't sound hard, right? I like the click sound when I cut off a branch neatly with the gardening scissors. But, I got nervous when my friend pointed out some branches had died due to wrong pruning. Oh sugar, I realised there're literally half dead branches there. It felt like doing a surgery which is about dead and life! On the top of that, we don't have gardening gloves. I felt the roses are spiky everywhere in spite of the petals, and they are absolutely sharp. The back of my friend's hand was cut by the spikes and bleeding. She acted as if nothing has happened. Well...for me, I felt even more nervous seeing the blood (deep breath). Maybe I'm fussed but I do need a pair of gardening gloves! While I'm typing this down, I kept thinking about how amazing that people's tolerant level changes in different contexts. Finally, the work is done! Hope the bare branches grow strongly and happily. I put some roses in a jar and enjoy the beauty and fragrance of them.
The winter here feels cold and long (especially when you don't have geothermal heating). It rains half of the month, but mainly showers. There's still some great sunlight during the day. I think it's a cracker of a city. I like to have some hot soups and drinks, covered by a blanket, snug and warm, and listen to the storm outside.
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Pruning Roses
It's the end of July, the middle of winter in Australia. It's the time to prune roses in the yard. My friend doesn't sound like a big fan of pruning. I haven't done that before, so I asked her to show me how to do it so I could help.
The pruning was exciting, nervous and spikkkky nerve wracking and a thorny experience for me !!! Here're the things I learned about pruning roses. First, find a bud that looks thriving in a low lying position of a brunch branch. Next, make a cut 1-2cm above the bud. Done! It doesn't sound hard, right? I like the click sound when I cut off a branch neatly with the gardening scissors [pruning shear]. But, I got nervous when my friend pointed out some branches had died due to wrong pruning. Oh sugar #, I realised there're literally half dead branches there. It felt like doing a surgery which is about dead and life I was doing life or death surgery! On the top of that, we don't didn't have gardening gloves. I felt The roses are felt spiky [better to say thorny] everywhere in spite of the petals, and they are were absolutely sharp. The back of my friend's hand was cut by the spikes and bleeding. She acted as if nothing has happened. Well...for me, I felt even more nervous seeing the blood (deep breath). Maybe I'm fussed# but I do need a pair of gardening gloves! While I'm I was typing this down, I kept thinking about how amazing that people's tolerant tolerance level changes in different contexts [... people tolerance level adjust to different situations]. "Finally, the work is done!," I thought to myself (because of your tense "is done," so I changed it to direct speech. Otherwise you need to say "was done"). Hope the bare branches grow strongly and happily. I put some roses in a jar and so I could enjoy their beauty and fragrance of them.
The winter here feels cold and long (especially when you don't have geothermal heating [central heading]). It rains half of the month, but mainly showers. There's still some great sunlight during the day. I think it's a cracker# of a city. I like to have some hot soups and drinks, covered by a blanket, snug and warm, and listen to the storm rain (storms are usually a scary experience) outside.
Parts marked with an # are our typical Aussie slang. It may not be acceptable in more formal writing. I'm also not sure if our mates around the world will understand these :) . Anyway, better to say "oh sugar" here than a curse word I guess ha ha.
I'm also not sure what you meant by geothermal heating. Did you mean central heating? "Central gas heating" or "Gas ducted heating" is quite common the Eastern states like Melbourne and Sydney but not so common in Perth. In Melbourne, the central heater is typically inside the roof cavity and there are air ducts to the ceiling to all living areas in the house. It heats the whole house. If you know how to say it in Chinese, please let me know in the comments. Is it 暖器系统 ?
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