day 20
Yesterday, my cousin came to our home and stayed here until a few hours ago. She is 18 and half years old. She is so younger than me but we can good touch with each others because we have many thing in common. Both of us can play an instrument. She can play santor (one of the Iranian instrument and I can play piano. Her major is photo graphic and I am amateur photographer. She asked me to teach her playing piano because she think playing piano is better than playing santor. I think she don't gratitude the things that she had I took a lot of pictures of her with her professional camera. We watched together a comic Iranian film and laughed. She love listen to the pop and rap music with a high sound from morning until night so make me very nervous because I love classic, calm and relax music.
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day 20
Yesterday, my cousin came to our home and stayed here until a few hours ago. She is 18 and a half years old. She is so younger than me but we can good touch share a good relationship with each others because we have many things in common. Both of us can play an instrument. She can play santoor (one of the Iranian instruments and I can play piano. Her major is in photo graphics (photography?) and I am an amateur photographer. She asked me to teach her playing piano because she thinks playing piano is better than playing santoor. I think she don't gratitude is not grateful for the things that she already had has. I took a lot of pictures of her with her professional camera. We watched an Iranian comedy film and laughed together. She loves to listen to the pop and rap music with a at high sound from morning until night. so It makes me very nervous because I love classical, calm and relaxing music.
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day 20
Yesterday, my cousin came to our home and stayed here until a few hours ago. She is 18 and half years old. She is so younger than me but we can good touch get along with each others because we have many things in common. Both of us can play an instrument. She can play santor (one of the Iranian instruments and I can play piano). Her major is photo graphic photography and I am an amateur photographer. She asked me to teach her playing piano because she thinks playing piano is better than playing santor. I think she don't gratitude doesn't appreciate the things that she had. I took a lot of pictures of her with her professional camera. We watched together a comic Iranian an Iranian comic film and laughed together. She loves listening to the pop and rap music with a high sound from very loudly since morning until night and that so makes me very nervous because I love classic, calm and relaxing music.
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