《Should we pay tax to the state？ 》
Many people may complain that tax is a heavy burden, because it can reduce their disposable income. but i think that we need to pay tax , because if don’t have revenue the society will hard to function.
Government can finance some public facility projects, such as roads,shools and hospitals, through the revenue. if we don’t have a excellent transport system, people’s commuting will become difficult, and traffic congestion will also bring a adverse impact. community school can provide the chance for those children who are too poverty to access to studing and it will be benifital to economy if them can learn more knowledges. those community project ganerally can not be supported by private companies, due to it’s not profitable. so, we have to realize that the government can accomplish the aim of finacial re-distribution via the manner of taxing. for example, in some countries, them levy high-income class with higher tax, but the low-income class can receipt the financial aid from governments.
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Should we pay tax to the state?
Many people may complain that tax is a heavy burden, because it can reduces their disposable income. but However, I think that we need to pay taxes because, if we don’t have tax revenues, the society will not be able to hard to function properly.
Government can finance some public facilities projects, such as roads, schools and hospitals, through this revenue. If we don’t have an excellent transport system, people’s commuting will become difficult, and traffic congestion will also bring a adverse impact. (or "traffic congestion will be worse")
Community schools can provide learning the chance for to those children who are too poor poverty to access private education to studying and it will be benifitial to the economy if they are better educated can learn more knowledges. These community projects, generally/usually, can not be supported by private companies, due to it’s as they are not profitable. So, we have to realize that the government can accomplish the aim of financial re-distribution via taxation the manner of taxing. For example, in some countries, they levy high-income earners class with higher tax rates, but while the low-income earners class can recieve receipt the financial aid from governments.
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- Always start a new sentence with a capital letter. There is never an exception to this.
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