Please correct my text))
Hello everyone!
It's been about 2 weeks since my last post. I'm looking forward to going to Karelia. It will be sunny next weekend. This is a good opportunity to visit a wonderful place where everyone can get in touch with nature. There are magnificent mountains, clean river and fresh air. I want to come here again and again.
I'm not saying goodbye. See you soon...
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Please correct my text))
Hello everyone!
It's been about 2 weeks since my last post. I'm looking forward to going to Karelia. It will be sunny next weekend. This is a good opportunity to visit a wonderful place where everyone can get in touch with nature. There are magnificent mountains, clean rivers and fresh air. I want to go there again and again.
I'm not saying goodbye. See you soon...
Very good, but you have an isolated sentence in the middle that is not connected in any way to the other sentences. This sentence:
There are magnificent mountains, clean rivers and fresh air.
Hello everyone!
It's been about 2 weeks since my last post. I'm looking forward to going to Karelia. It will be sunny next weekend. This is a good opportunity to visit a wonderful place, where there are magnificent mountains, clean rivers and fresh air and everyone can get in touch with nature. I want to go there again and again.
I'm not saying goodbye. See you soon...
Come here again and again does not match the beginning of the story, you looking forward means you are not there now, therefore you cannot come back. You only come back to a/the place you are currently at/located/staying/living/camping at whatever. You must have to GO back there.
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