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Hi, I'm Javier. Apart from correcting it, I would like to know if this writing reaches the B2 level. Good morning, I am writing with regard to the advertisement which was published in last Sunday’s edition of The Early News. The advertisement was about a engineering job and I am interesting in it. I consider myself the perfect candidate for the job for these reasons: First, I have worked during eight months in a prestigious company of electrical engineering. Second, I got the best marks in my promotion. Finally, I am willing to accept a low salary without bonus. I have the necessary qualification and I have already worked too. Like I have said, I worked during eight months in a electrical engineering company. In addition, during these months I become the section chief. Another point is that I have a large experience in language learning. I speak fluently Spanish, French and English. Moreover, I am able to speak a few russian. As for my personality, I consider myself not only a organized and hardworking person, but also an outgoing and cheerful person. Furthermore, I have good qualities with people and I am very good communicating with them. In conclusion, I fulfil all the requirements and I am very motivated to start my professional career so I consider myself the perfect candidate. Regards, John.

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Good morning,

I am writing with regard to the advertisement which was published in last Sunday’s edition of The Early News. The advertisement was about an engineering job and I am interested in it.

I consider myself the perfect candidate for the job for these reasons: First, I have worked for eight months in a prestigious company in electrical engineering. Second, I got the best marks in my promotion. Finally, I am willing to accept a low salary without a bonus.

I have the necessary qualification and I have already worked too. Like I have said, I worked for eight months in an electrical engineering company. In addition, during these months I become the section chief.

Another point is that I have a large experience in language learning. I speak Spanish, French, and English fluently. Moreover, I can speak a little Russian.

As for my personality, I consider myself not only an organized and hardworking person, but also an outgoing and cheerful person. Furthermore, I have good qualities with people and I am very good at communicating with them.

In conclusion, I fulfill all the requirements and I am very motivated to start my professional career so I consider myself the perfect candidate.

Regards,
John

P.S. There are some other mistakes in terms of word choice and text clarity. I would say this is B1 level of English.
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Hi, I'm Javier. Apart from correcting it, I would like to know if this writing reaches the B2 level.

Good morning,

I am writing with regard to the advertisement which was published in last Sunday’s edition of The Early News. The advertisement was about a engineering job and I am interested in it.

I consider myself the perfect candidate for the job for these reasons: First, I have worked during eight months in a prestigious electrical engineering company. Second, I received the best marks in my promotion. Finally, I am willing to accept a low salary without bonus.

I have the necessary qualifications and I have already worked too. Like I have said, I worked during eight months in a electrical engineering company. In addition, during these months I became the section chief.

Another point is that I have a lot of experience in language learning. I speak fluently Spanish, French and English. Moreover, I am able to speak some Russian.

As for my personality, I consider myself not only an organized and hardworking person, but also an outgoing and cheerful person. Furthermore, I have good qualities with people and I am very good communicating with them.

In conclusion, I fulfill all the requirements and I am very motivated to start my professional career so I consider myself the perfect candidate.

Regards, John.

I would say you have a B2 level....

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