My Notepad -1
This Entry is based on IELTS practice test. I have shared the question for the one task. I wish the note to be corrected by IELTS/ Trained English teachers.
1. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbour
I have received the complaint yesterday. I am deeply regret for such an act. I had never meant to harm anyone in any way. I had recently shifted to this new apartment few days ago. The renovation work had just started, and will take some more days to complete. There are lot of pending jobs to be done this week, since my whole family would be shifted to this apartment in the next weekend. Some of the issues need to be fixed are electrical works, plumbing, carpentry and painting at the earliest.
I had asked the workers to do their job smoothly and quickly to avoid the disturbance and will never give another chance for a grievance. I had asked the workers to shorten the duration of the work, or to opt for a shift based system. Shift based work will definitely reduce the noise occuring due to the renovation.
I believe that I have addressed you problem. If you have any additional request, please feel free to contact me.
Thanks and Regards
Roy
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Your letter is good but has some little mistakes of articles and tenses. The letter though does have the correct layout and you communicate well answering all the parts. Clearly you have a lot of knowledge of writing. As a general rule, try to write using at least the past present and future as well as either a comparative (however, unlike, on the other hand) or a conditional. You need to show the examiner the best of your Engljsh.
My Notepad -1
This Entry is based on IELTS practice test. I have shared the question for the one task. I wish the note to be corrected by IELTS/ Trained English teachers.
1. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbour Jim,
I have received the complaint yesterday. I am deeply regret sorry for such an act. I had never meant to harm anyone in any way. I had recently shifted to this new apartment a few days ago. The renovation work had just started, and will take some more days to complete. There are a lot of pending jobs to be done this week, since my whole family will would be shifted to this apartment in the next weekend. Some of the issues needing to be fixed are electrical works, plumbing, carpentry and painting at the earliest.
I had asked the workers to do their job smoothly and quickly to avoid the disturbance and will never give another chance for a grievance. I had asked the workers to shorten the duration of the work, or to opt for a shift based system. A Shift based work will definitely reduce the noise occuring due to the renovation.
I believe that I have addressed you problem. If you have any additional requests, please feel free to contact me.
Thanks and Regards
Roy
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