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Tryhatty, the festival of kites Tryhutty, the festival of kites, is known as flamboyant and colourful spectacle. It falls on the fourth of June and it's an event not to be missed. Thousands of kites in the form of dragons are flown in the air. The festival is usually spread over three or more days. Within these days the sky abounds with kites of different forms and designs. In the evenings huge bonfires light the sky up. On the third day, people put a firework display to round the festival off with it. During these days all people are invited to join in the festivities, they sing songs and perform dances around a huge fire, They go wild and party like there is no tomorrow. What amazed me was a festive mood and a warm reception. People showered me with bright kites and invited to the feast, which was held on the third day. I couldn't help smiling when I got home. These are the sort of things which make me feel glad to be alive.

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Tryhatty, the festival of kites

Tryhutty, the festival of kites, is known as a flamboyant and colourful spectacle. It falls on the fourth of June, and it's an event not to be missed. Thousands of kites in the form of dragons are flown in the air. The festival is usually spread over (or: 'usually takes place over') three or more days. Within During these days the sky abounds with kites of different forms and designs. In the evenings huge bonfires light the sky up (or: 'light up the sky'). On the third day, people put a firework display to round the festival off with it people round off the festival with a firework display. During these days all people are (or, more natural: 'everyone is') invited to join in the festivities; they sing songs and perform dances around a huge fire. They go wild and party like there is no tomorrow. What amazed me was a festive mood and a warm reception. (Or: The festive mood and the warm reception amazed me.) People showered me with bright kites and invited me to the feast, which was held on the third day. I couldn't help smiling when I got home. These are the sort of things which make me feel glad to be alive.

Great job! I swapped some phrases for a more natural-sounding construction, but really clear and correct on the whole!

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