Panpan’s Summer Vacation--DAY 6
It rained heavily that day. Panpan had to stay at home. He finished his homework and selected a book from the shelf.
Panpan took the book on the desk and began to read. That book was called the Children’s Encyclopedia (insects volume).
“It’s amzing that the spider is not an insect!” Panpan said when he read the chapter of the spiders, “I will ask Lanlan to see whether she knew.”
Then Panpan called Lanlan and asked her a question.
“Lanlan, I found out a question when I read the book, can you help me?”
“Of course, Panpan. What’s the question?”
“The question is whether the spider is an insect.”
“An important feature of the insects is that they all have six legs. Panpan, can you tell me how many legs a spider has?”
“Eight legs.”
“So, it’s obvious that the spider is not an insect.”
“If the spider is not an insect, what animal does it belong to?”
“The spider is an arachnid.”
“Wow, you are so knowledgeable that no question can beat you.”
“Thank you! If you read many books and think more, you will be knowledgeable too.”
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Panpan’s Summer Vacation--DAY 6
It rained heavily that day. Panpan had to stay at home. He finished his homework and selected a book from the shelf.
Panpan took the book on to the desk (or "put the book on the desk") and began to read. That book was called (or "It was called") the Children’s Encyclopedia (insects volume).
“It’s amazing that the spider is not an insect!” Panpan said when he read the chapter of the on (or "about") spiders, “I will ask Lanlan to see whether she knew.”
Then Panpan called Lanlan and asked her a question (you don't have to say "a question" here because it is clear from the context).
“Lanlan, I have a question for you from when I read the book, can you help me?”
“Of course, Panpan. What’s the question?”
“The question is whether the spider is an insect.”
“An important feature of the insects is that they all have six legs. Panpan, can you tell me how many legs a spider has?”
“Eight legs.”
“So, it’s obvious that the spider is not an insect.”
“If the spider is not an insect, what kind of animal is it? animal does it belong to?”
“The spider is an arachnid.”
“Wow, you are so knowledgeable that no question can beat you.”
“Thank you! If you read many books and think more, you will be knowledgeable too.”
This was really good Edward. I only made minor corrections, and your tone is quite natural. Good luck with your English studies!
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