are really obsessed with
I agree that people are really obsessed with the idea of self-improvement. Nowadays a lot of people want to be a better version of yourself because it’s a new trend to become healthy and wealthy. First, you should step out your comfort zone to start attending these courses. During the lesson, you will have a chance to hone your skills. Later you can draw lessons that you have to change in your real life and how to broaden perspectives. What kind of steps you should do to aim your higher goals.
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are really obsessed with
I agree that think people are really obsessed with the idea of self-improvement. Nowadays, a lot of people want to be a better version of yourself themselves because it’s a new trend to become healthy and wealthy. First, you should step out your comfort zone to start attending these courses. During the lessons, you will have a chance to hone your skills. Later, you can draw lessons upon what you have learnt that you have to make changes in your real life and how to broaden your perspectives. What kind of steps should you do take to aim for your higher goals?
Thank you!
Privet Aleksey, please don't worry about the mistakes - your grammar is quite good - it's mainly a question of learning the forms of these expressions. Reading a lot might help.
Keep practicing! Simon.
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