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According in which companies we work with, we are always going to find differences that can go from working hours, to the food served in the cafeteria or even to the tiniest detail like the quality of the coffee machine. However today we are going to talk about two kinds of office design and explaining their pros and cons.
First of all let's start with the enclosed workstations or also called cubicles, where each employee has his own tiny space, separated by sorts of thin walls from his colleagues desks. This type of design is great to improve concentration, since there is no conversation between co-workers possible, which makes the working environment surprisingly calm and prosperous to work. Secondly the employees have more privacy and therefore don't feel stressed or awkward by other's gaze like it can be the case in open design. However it can also lead to unproductivity and a lack of motivation. Indeed spending all day long in a tiny room without any social contact and just being absorbed by enormous amount of work can be overwhelming for the workers.
Secondly we are going to talk about open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. The first pros is that they benefit from more space. Without walls it looks bigger, the sun rays creep up easier and makes it a nice atmosphere. Furthermore they are more communication possible between coworkers, which can be really useful and may turn out to be more productive. Nevertheless, it can be really noisy, which makes it hard to be or to say concentrated.
To conclude I would like to say that both of them have pros and cons and the employee should be the one that choose his office according to his preferences.
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please correct me !
First of all, let's start with the enclosed workstations, or also called cubicles, where each employee has his own tiny space, separated by sorts of thin walls from his colleagues' desks. This type of design is great to improve concentration, since there is no conversation between co-workers possible (I would suggest: "since it reduces the possibility of conversations between coworkers), which makes the working environment surprisingly calm and prosperous (I would suggest a different adjective: maybe, "efficient" or "productive"? "Prosperous" would not be used in this context.) to work in. Secondly, the employees have more privacy and therefore don't feel stressed or awkward by other's gaze (My suggestion: "by being observed"), like it as can be the case in open design (or open-concept workspaces). However, it can also lead to unproductivity and a lack of motivation. Indeed, spending all day long in a tiny room without any social contact and just being absorbed in an enormous amount of work can be overwhelming for the workers.
Secondly, we are going to talk about open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. The first pros (or advantage) is that they benefit from [having] more space. Without walls, it looks bigger, the sun rays creep up easier (This is an awkward construction. "To creep up" means to move slowly without being noticed. You could write: "it lets in more sunlight") and makes it creates a nice atmosphere. Furthermore, there is (or can be) are more communication possible between coworkers, which can be really useful and may turn out to be more productive. Nevertheless, it (or the space) can be (or become) really noisy, which makes it hard to be or to stay concentrated.
To conclude, I would like to say that both of them (I would write "both types of design" to make it clear what "them" refers to) have pros and cons, and the employee should be the one that chooses his (or her) office according to his (or her) preferences.
(I hope that this helps! Feel free to let me know if you have questions about any of the corrections. —M.)
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According to the kind of company we work in/for, we are always going to find differences that can range from the working hours, to the food served in the cafeteria, or even to the tiniest detail like the quality of the coffee machine. However, today we are going to talk about two kinds of office design and explain their pros and cons.
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Depending on which companies we work in...differences that can range from..office design and explain their pros and cons..let's start with enclosed workstations or so called cubicles..their own tiny space..their colleagues desks..calm and effective to work in...or awkward being in view of other people as can be the case in an open design...can also lead to a loss of productivity..by an enormous amount of work..co-workers..the first pro..without walls the office looks bigger, the sun's rays penetrate more easily which makes for a nicer atmosphere..there is more communication..to stay concentrated..the employees should be able to choose their office according to their preferences.
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