Hi there!
Today I will talk about one of my pets, Odyssey is my dog, she is 8 years old and it's a rhodesian ridgeback. This breed is big and strong in spite of this qualities she is shy and fearful, we adopt her 4 years ago and we are sure that the previous person who had it used to mistreat it. She had a sad corporal language with a depressed look, she whining when the mens of my family closed to her even when she feel really scared she urinated no matter the place, used to she hidded behind the furniture and she never barked. But with the time and with a big amount of love, she has been able to deal with this. She has stick to my mom because is the person who spend more time in the house, and the rest of us we papmer her frecuentrly, whe she sleeps is like a baby but she snores. We love her
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Hi there!
Today I will talk about one of my pets, Odyssey is my dog. She is an 8 year old, Rhodesian Ridgeback. This breed is big and strong. Despite these qualities, she is shy and fearful. We adopted her 4 years ago and we are sure that her previous owner used to mistreat hert. She displayed a sad body language and had a depressed look. She whined when male members of my family got close to her. Whenever she felt really scared, she urinated anywhere, hid behind furniture, and never barked. Time and a lot of love has helped her deal with this. She has gotten very close to my mom because she is the person, who spends more time in the house with Odyssey. The rest of us frequently pamper her. She sleeps like a baby, but she snores. We love her.
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Hi there!
Today I will talk about one of my pets, Odyssey is my dog, she is 8 years old and it's is a rhodesian ridgeback. This breed is big and strong in spite of this these qualities she is shy and fearful, we adopted her 4 years ago and we are sure that the previous person who had it her used to mistreat it her. She had a sad corporal language with a depressed look, she whining whines when the men of my family closed to her even when she feel really scared she urinated urinates no matter the place, used to she hidded she used to hide behind the furniture and she never barked. But with the time and with a big amount of love, she has been able to deal with this. She has stick stuck to my mom because she is the person who spend more time in the house, and the rest of us we papmer her frecuentrly frequently, when she sleeps it is like a baby but she snores. We love her
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Some corrections
1) we adopted her (past tense)
2)she was whining when the men of my family were close to her (missing word was and past tense)
3)before she hid (past tense)
4)she has stuck (past tense)
5)frequently (spelling error)
6)when she sleeps like a baby (don’t need the word is)
Overall really good and great language!
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