Please help refine my English translation of a Chinese poem Here's the original text of the poem by 洛夫 Luo Fu (1928-2018): 春天真好 萬物各安其生 雀鳥的啁啾只不過是蟲子驚叫的回聲 And here's my translation, and I'd like to refine it more: Spring is so fine that all creature finds it’s own place in nature. The sparrow chirps are but an echo of the insect’s exclamations. Thank you!