What Do I Do When I Feel Sad （16）
When I feel sad, I always spent much time considering what should I do to make me happy. Because when I feel sad, I almost stop thinking about what I want to eat or where I want to go for relaxing.
When I was young, I always told sadness to my parents or best friend. My parents comforted me well, but many days ago they still tried to comfort me and worried me very much. I studied and worked alone far away from hometown, lived in the unfamiliar city, but I still could feel worried from my parents’ voice on the phone. I told sadness to my best friend as well, she comforted me using her ways that is convictive. But the time we got together is short, we often shared happy news more than sad time. Now, I watched movies when I feel sad. In the movie, I could always find a kind of life that can inspire me forward.
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What Do I Do When I Feel Sad （16）
When I feel sad, I always spend a lot of time considering what I should do to make me happy. Because when I feel sad, I almost stop thinking about what I want to eat or where I want to go to relax.
When I was young, I always talked about sadness to my parents or best friend. My parents comforted me well, but many days ago they still tried to comfort me and worried me very much. I studied and worked alone far away from hometown (home/my hometown), lived in the unfamiliar city, but I could still feel worried from my parents’ voice on the phone. I talked about sadness to my best friend as well, she comforted me using her ways that is convictive. But the time we got together was short, we often shared happy news more than sad times. Now, I watch movies when I feel sad. In the movie, I could always find a kind of life that can inspire me forward.
#30 days writing challenge - 16#
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What Do I Do When I Feel Sad （16）
When I feel sad, I always spend a lot of much time considering thinking about what I should do to make myself happy. Because when I feel sad, I almost stop thinking about what I want to eat or where I want to go for to relaxing.
When I was young, I always told sadness to my parents or best friend if I was sad. My parents comforted me well, but many days ago they still tried to comfort me and I still felt worried me very much. I studied and worked alone far away from my hometown. I lived in the an unfamiliar city, but I still could hear feel worried the worry in from my parents’ voice on the phone. I told sadness talked about my feelings to my best friend as well, she comforted me using her ways that is which were quite convictive. But the time we got together is was short, we often shared happy news more than sad time news. Now, I watched movies when I feel sad. In the a movie, I could can always find a kind of life that can inspires me to move forward.
#30 days writing challenge - 16#
Amazing, keep writing Sally! If you would like some help on tenses, check out this helpful link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3lI3R9_Z1HY&t=730s
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