You don't know her at all
"You think you've seen her naked because she took her clothes off? Tell me about her dreams. Tell me what breaks her heart. What is she passionate about, and what makes her cry? Tell me about her childhood. Better yet, tell me a story about her that you're not in".
See, love runs a lot deeper than skin.
- Unknown
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You don't know her at all
"You think you've seen her naked because she took her clothes off? Tell me about her dreams. Tell me what breaks her heart. What is she passionate about, and what makes her cry? Tell me about her childhood. Better yet, tell me a story about her that you're not in".
See, love runs a lot deeper than skin.
- Unknown
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Beautifully written. For your final line, a widely used (perhaps too widely used) phrase might be "love is more than skin deep." Perhaps yours has more impact because of its unfamiliarity, its freshness.
On this theme, perhaps, an old Leonard Cohen song (Take This Longing) includes as part of its chorus
"Let me see your beauty broken down
Like you would do for one you love"
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