Could you please correct these sentences?
I'll be really appreciated if you make some correction the sentences below.
#1
A) Wasn't that too much? You could've been more mature by talking to me inside. You really had to be like that? I was being really embarrassed around many crowd for your loud scolding.
B) You were the first who crossed the line. I I endured as much as I could now. I couldn't stand anymore.
A) Tell me, then, what I was wrong with?
B) First you publicly made fun of me with describing me as a bat, saying that I was like changing my form all the time according to the situation, to get benefit. But that was hundred percent fake news!
A) Hey, come on! Although it's true that I called you a bat, I didn't mean it seriously! It was for fun. And the people there took that it just for a joke.
B) But I wasn't happy about it!
A) Then why didn't you tell me on the spot?
B) Does that make sense? How could I possibly tell you there with having many friends too? Please think more carefully!
A) Ok.. Come on. Calm down. I admitted it and I'm sorry for not taking your feeling very well.
B) And there are more!
A) Ok. Keep going.
#2
A) Hi, Oh... Is this a bad time? `I can come back later`.
B) Not at all. I `was just about to` take a break `anyway.` What's up?
A) I just wanted to ask you something `real quick`. Is that OK?
B) Sure. What is it?
A) Can you do overnight duty coming Wednesday, instead of me?
B) Oh, I guess I can't make it. I am supposed to meet my girlfriend the day. Why don't you ask to Alex? I suppose he'll be okay.
A) Oh, Thanks for letting me know.
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Could you please correct these sentences?
I'll really appreciate it if you make some corrections to the sentences below.
#1
A) Wasn't that too much? You could've been more mature by talking to me separately . Did you really have to be like that? I was really embarrassed when you to scolded me like that in front of a big crowd (or: being around many people) (or: in front of everyone(better))
B) You were the first one who crossed the line and I have endured as much as I could up until now but I couldn't stand it anymore.
A) Tell me, then, what did I do wrong?
B) First, you publicly made fun of me by describing me as a bat and saying that I keep changing my form all the time according to the situation to get benefit. But that was hundred percent false!
A) Hey, come on! Although it's true that I called you a bat, I didn't mean it seriously! It was for fun. And the people there just took it as a joke.
B) But I wasn't happy about it!
A) Then why didn't you tell me on the spot?
B) Does that make sense? How could I possibly tell you there in front of your friends? Please think more carefully!
A) Ok.. Come on. Calm down. I admit it and I'm sorry for not taking your feelings into consideration very well.
B) And there are more!
A) Ok. Keep going.
#2
A) Hi, Oh... Is this a bad time? `I can come back later`.
B) Not at all. I `was just about to` take a break `anyway.` What's up?
A) I just wanted to ask you something `real quick`. Is that OK?
B) Sure. What is it?
A) Can you do nightshift duty this coming Wednesday instead of me?
B) Oh, I guess I can't.. I am supposed to meet my girlfriend that day. Why don't you ask Alex? I suppose he'll be okay with it.
A) Oh, Thanks for letting me know
작은 실수가 있지만 정말 잘 했어요. There are small mistakes but you really did good. 도음이 되길 바래요. I hope it helps~
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Could you please correct these sentences?
I'll be really appreciated it if you make some corrections to the sentences below.
#1
A) Wasn't that too much? It would've been more mature to talk to me inside. You really had to be like that? I was being really embarrassed around many crowd for your loud scolding.
B) You were the first who crossed the line. I I endured as much as I could now. I couldn't stand anymore.
A) Tell me, then, what I was wrong with it?
B) First you publicly made fun of me while describing me as a bat, saying that I was like changing my form all the time according to the situation, to get benefit. But that was hundred percent fake news! false
A) Hey, come on! Although it's true that I called you a bat, I didn't mean it seriously! It was for fun. And the people there took that it just for a joke.
B) But I wasn't happy about it!
A) Then why didn't you tell me on the spot?
B) Does that make sense? How could I possibly tell you there with having telling many friends too? Please think more carefully!
A) Ok.. Come on. Calm down. I admitted it and I'm sorry for not taking your feeling very well.
B) And there are more!
A) Ok. Keep going.
#2
A) Hi, Oh... Is this a bad time? `I can come back later`.
B) Not at all. I `was just about to` take a break `anyway.` What's up?
A) I just wanted to ask you something `real quick`. Is that OK?
B) Sure. What is it?
A) Can you do the night shift this coming Wednesday, instead of me?
B) Oh, I guess I can't make it. I am supposed to meet my girlfriend that day. Why don't you ask to Alex? I suppose he'll be okay.
A) Oh, Thanks for letting me know.
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