Writing Exercise, day 4
When she was fifteen she and her family moved for a big city, because there was a good job for the father. Besides the salary was better than in a small city, the cost of life was more higher as well. In that city, rarely the neighbourhood aren't easy to communicate and probably all houses there was a dangerous and big dog in it.
She made friends on school, but she and her family stayed just one year and a half, and because of that her friendships didn't have so much develop.
For her, that experience was a little dramatic, but her mother and her, they had found new activities, like cooking a sort of fruit cakes and cookies and play piano.
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Writing Exercise, Day 4
When she was fifteen, she and her family moved to a big city, because there was a good job for her father. Although the salary was better than in the smaller city, the cost of living was higher as well. In that city (unclear-- which city, the big city or the small city? It might be good to name the cities to clarify), the neighbors did not communicate, the houses were dangerous, and there was a large, scary dog.
She made friends in school, but she and her family stayed just one year and a half, and because of that, her friendships didn't develop very much.
For her, that experience was a little traumatic, but her mother and her found new activities to enjoy, like cooking fruit cakes and cookies, and playing the piano.
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Writing Exercise, day 4
When she was fifteen she and her family moved to a big city, because there was a good job for her father. Although the salary was better than in the smaller city, the cost of living was higher as well. In that city, it wasn't easy to communicate with the neighbors, and in almost all the houses there was a big and dangerous dog.
She made friends in school, but she and her family stayed just a year and a half, and so her friendships didn't have time to develop.
For her, that experience was a little dramatic, but she and her mother found new activities, like baking fruit cakes and cookies, and playing piano.
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