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Buying food in the market Jun 11st 2020 There have many places to buy the food to cook in China. Such as big supermarket, small supermarket, and vegetable market. Firstly, the big supermarket has many kinds of things. You can find it many kinds of food what do you need in daily. Usually I go to big supermarket to buy food once a week. It because I arrived home too late everyday. It is around 9:00pm. So I go to the supermarket on weekend because I off work early. I will buy the food for a week when I go there. Such as chickens, pork ribs, and fishes. Then put them into the refrigerator. Less vegetables because it can’t keep for too long. They will be damaged. Especially the weather is too hot in Summer. Most of people prefer with family go to a big supermarket to buy food because there have the air condition. It is comfortable. And also the children would like to with parents to go to the supermarket because it looks like a place to play. There have many toys in the market. Children feel happy. Secondly, I got the main food from a big supermarket. I also go to the small supermarket often. There can buy some fresh vegetables and less meal. There have small markets all over around the house. These small market are working in 24/7. People can buy the food anytime. It’s easy for office worker because near in their room. I also like the small market. Thirdly, for vegetable market, they sell vegetables, meal, and some special food. But I am not really like to there. There are many damage vegetable leaves on the ground, and the floor is wet, it looks like dirty. Especially for raining day. The smell of fish is not good. But you can buy many kinds of fresh fishes and seafood in there. So if you like to buy the fresh or special food that vegetables is a good choice for you. Because both of big and small supermarket are not these food.

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I've written below what I (American English speaker) think sounds most natural while best retaining your content and voice:

There are many places to buy food to cook in China, such as big supermarkets, small supermarkets, and vegetable markets.
Firstly, big supermarkets have many kinds of things. You can find many kinds of food that you eat everyday. Usually I go to big supermarkets to buy food once a week. On weekdays, I get home around 9:00pm, which is too late to go to the supermarket. Therefore, I go to the supermarket on weekends because I get off work early. I buy food, such as chicken, pork rib, and fish, when I go there. Once I get home, I put it (referring to the singular "food") into the refrigerator. Less vegetables because it can’t keep for too long. (I'm not exactly sure what you mean in the previous sentence, so I didn't correct it) They will be damaged. Especially when the weather is hot in Summer, most people prefer to go with their families to big supermarkets to buy food because they have air conditioning. It is comfortable. Also children like to go with their parents to the supermarket because it looks like a place to play. They have many toys in the market. Children feel happy.
Secondly, though I get my main items from a big supermarket, I also go to the small supermarket often. There, you can buy some fresh vegetables and less meal (Did you mean to say "meat?"). There are small markets all over around the house (I'm not quite sure what you mean here). These small markets are open 24/7. People can buy food anytime. It’s easy for office workers because near in their room (This isn't a complete sentence, and I'm not sure what you mean by "near in their room."). I also like the small markets.
Thirdly, regarding vegetable markets, they sell vegetables, meal, and some special food. But I don't really like to go there. There are many damaged vegetable leaves on the ground, and the floor is wet; it looks dirty, especially on rainy days. The smell of fish is not good. But you can buy many kinds of fresh fish and seafood in there. So if you like to buy fresh or special food, the vegetable market is a good choice for you because neither the big nor small supermarkets carry these items.

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