Health is of vital importance to life.
In our life, Health has differences effectson eating, seeping and So on. Now,I think health is very important in our life.About how to keep a good health? Fistlyyou can change your eating habits , tryto eat some fresh food and healthy
food , and less junk food. Secondly, youcan get up early and go to bed early，besides, you can also go to the hospital every two months
I hope these methods that will help youto keep a good health.
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Very nice writing - please remember to check your writing before you send it because here there were a few words where you forgot to use the space. e.g "effectson" which should be "effects on".
But your grammar is very good, perfect actually, you just need to remember that not all nouns have an article like "health" which is not countable.
Great writing!
Health is of vital importance to life.
In our life, Health has differences eating, sleeping and So on. Now,I think health is very important in our life.About how to keep a good health? Firstly you can change your eating habits , try to eat some fresh food and healthy
food , and less junk food. Secondly, you can get up early and go to bed early，besides, you can also go to the hospital every two months
I hope these methods that will help you to keep a good health.
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