Could some one help me to check mistakes and do it beautifully
Lately I’m thinking about my kindness for people.I thought every one who met me,is friend.Believed in them,when I saw them I smiled with really happily because I was happy when meet them!I did my support to everyone,but when I needed no one!I think people think that if someone very kindly toward you and if you pleading doing that wish,and paying attention!But when I needed no one besides me!Until now I thought I have many friends,but actually in reality they are not so many as I thought!We are going to be adults,I think it is time to clearing peoples who are fake!
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Could some one help me to check mistakes and do it beautifully
Lately I’ve been thinking about my kindness towards people. I think I am friends with everyone I have met. I have believed in them, when I saw them I smiled with really happily because I was happy to meet them! I give my support to everyone, but when I needed no one!(This sentence i'm not sure of your meaning) I think people think that if someone acts very kindly toward you and if you help them with their wishes,and paying attention to them! However, when I needed someone, there is no one besides me! Until now I thought that I have a lot of friends, but actually in reality there are not so many as I thought! We are going to be adults,I think it is time to let go of the people who are fake!
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Could some one help me to check mistakes and do it beautifully
Lately I’ve been thinking about my kindness. I used to think everyone I know is friend. When I saw my friends I smiled happily because I was happy when I got to know them!I supported everyone,but whenever I need someone, no one is there !I assume people think that someone is only kind to you, if you plead for paying attention! when I needed someone, no one besides me!Until now I’ve thought I have many friends,but actually in reality there are not so many friends as I thought! We are all have to grow up. I think it is time to eliminate fake people!
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