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Please, check my 6-month progress report Hi! Please, check my report, i need it to sound formal or semi-formal. Thank you! Introduction The purpose of this report is to evaluate the progress following the first half year in my current position of Content Manager. It will also offer suggestions for my professional development in the coming months. Achievements In the past six months of my employment I have launched the company's website update and have increased the number of the followers on Instagram on 25% by creating a new strategy of content presentation. I also have promoted the website to the top-10 positions on Google for several search quieries by means of SEO. Problems Despite all of this I am struggling with the lack of communication and provision of information by some departments. Being a new team member I need my coworkers to be more open and involved in telling the details of the work they are responsible for. This will help me provide the clients with all the necessary information about out company and enhance customer loyalty. Future training opportunities Considering my past experience at the company, two possible improvements can be identified. First of all, I would suggest the meeting with the Product, Personnel and PR departments to be regular in order to develop a more sustainable strategy on interaction with clients. Secondly, I would take a training or hire an agency specializing in Tik-Tok as I see new opportunities for the company in this network.

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Please, check my 6-month progress report

Hi! Please, check my report. I i need it to sound formal or semi-formal.
Thank you!

Introduction
The purpose of this report is to evaluate my the progress following the first half year in my current position as of Content Manager. It will also offer suggestions for my professional development in the coming months.

Achievements
In the past six months of my employment, I have launched the company's website update and have increased our the number of the followers on Instagram by on 25% through by creating a new strategy of content presentation. I also have promoted the website into the top-10 positions on Google for several search queries quieries utilizing by means of SEO.

Problems
Despite all of this, I am struggling with the lack of communication and the provision (sounds a little awkward to use this word) of information by some departments. Being a new team member, I need my coworkers to be more open and involved in sharing telling the details of the work that they are responsible for. This will help me provide our the clients with all the necessary information about our out company and to enhance customer loyalty.

Future training opportunities
Considering my past experience at the company, I can identify two possible improvements. can be identified. First of all, I would suggest the that meetings between with the Product, Personnel and PR departments be held regularly (Maybe suggest how often e.g. every week or every two weeks. ) in order to develop a more sustainable strategy on interaction with our clients. Secondly, I would enroll in a take a training or hire an agency specializing in Tik-Tok as I see new opportunities for our the company in using this social network/ platform.
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Please, check my 6-month progress report

Hi! Please, check my report, i need it to sound formal or semi-formal.
Thank you!

Introduction
The purpose of this report is to evaluate the progress following the first half year in my current position of Content Manager. It will also offer suggestions for my professional development in the coming months.

Achievements
In the past six months of my employment, I have launched the company's website update and have increased the number of the followers on Instagram on by 25% by creating a new strategy of content presentation. I also have promoted the website into the top-10 positions on Google for several search queries by means of SEO.

Problems
Despite the aforementioned achievements, all of this I am struggling with the lack of communication and provision accessibility of information by some departments. Being a new team member, I need my coworkers to be more open and involved in telling the sharing details of the work they are responsible for. This will help me provide the clients with all the necessary information about our company and enhance customer loyalty.

Future training opportunities
Considering my past experience at the company, I'd suggest two possible improvements can be identified. First of all, I would suggest that the meeting with between the Product, Personnel and PR departments to be regular in order to develop a more sustainable strategy on interaction with clients. Secondly, I'd recommend would take a self training or hiring an agency specializing in Tik-Tok as I see new opportunities for the company in on this platform network.


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Rita, your English is very sophisticated. Good luck on your report!

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