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Today I want to write the E-mail to my UK host family. I want to write the E-mail to my host family, but I need you to help me make that corrections thank you. Dear Susan and Bill: How are you? Missing you so much! How time fly, seems like I leaved cambridge 4 months.Can you remember me? I'm a EF international student, I been lived your home two weeks. That's a such memorable. I still can remember my beautiful room that's have nice tree near by my window.That's so romantic! Right now I still can't stop the missing Susan's mouthwatering cook! :) that's fantastic! If I can I will go back to find you! ok, stop talking! hope you have nice week. BR lolita.xi

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Today I want to write the E-mail to my UK host family.

I want to write an E-mail to my host family, but I need you to help me make that some corrections. Thank you.

Dear Susan and Bill:

How are you? I have been missing you so much! How time flies, and it seems like I left Cambridge four months ago.  Can you remember me? I'm an EF International student, and I been lived in your home for two weeks. That's  It was such a memorable experience. I still can remember my beautiful room that had a nice tree by thewindow. That's so very romantic! Right now, I still can't stop the missing Susan's mouthwatering cooking! :) that's It was fantastic! If I can be able to, I will go back to find you! OK, stop talking! Hope you have nice week.

BR
lolita.xi

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Today I want to write the E-mail to my UK host family.

I want to write an E-mail to my host family, but I need your help by making some corrections to it. Thank you.

Dear Susan and Bill,

How are you? I miss you so much! How time flies. It has already been four months since I left Cambridge! Can you still remember me? I was the EF International student who lived in your home for two weeks. That was such a memorable experience. I still can remember my beautiful room that had a nice tree by the window.That was so romantic! Right now, I still can't stop missing Susan's mouthwatering cooking! :) It was fantastic! If I can, I will go back and find you. Okay, I will stop talking now! :) I hope you have nice week.

BR
lolita.xi

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Today I want to write the E-mail to my UK host family.

I want to write the E-mail to my host family, but I need you to help me make that corrections thank you.

Dear Susan and Bill:

How are you? Missing you so much! How time flies, seems like I have leaved cambridge for 4 months.Do you still remember me? I'm a EF international student, I've been lived together with you for two weeks. That's so memorable. I still can remember my beautiful room that's has nice trees near by the window.That's so romantic! Right now I still can't stop the missing Susan's mouthwatering cook! :) that's fantastic! I wonder, If possible, whether I would go back to live with you again! ok, stop talking! hope you have nice week.

BR
lolita.xi

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sorry. I wanted to write "by the window" instead of by thwwindow. That's the best correction I can make.

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