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Day 4 of 30 WC Hi everyone , Today is the only day of the week that I have not exchanges , so today is my day off 😁 . Today I was watching old videos of boxing , I like to see it because we have many champions of the world , like Erick " El Terrible " Morales , Marco Antonio Barrera, Juan Manuel " Dinamita " Marquez and the best : Julio Cesar Chavez I enjoy watching these olds fights because were very exaiting , when I see them getting hits and despite of that they keep going 😀it is awesome; they were braves people , because sometimes they were losing their fights and they overlapped , Sometimes I watch the same fight many times , just to realize how was it , you know, how was the punches, how many times they fell , if they almost fell etc. I think that the must exaiting fight was Julio Cesar Chavez vs Meldrick Taylor , Chavez was losing the fight because Taylor was very fast and Chavez had received a lot of punches , but Chavez had a iron heart and nobody had defeated him , and in the last round Chavez went out for him ,the whole country was watching the fight and , in the last seconds when was missing less than twenty seconds , Chavez punched him and knocked him down and won the fight , Chavez continued unbeaten, he is the greatest Idol of boxing of México. Thanks a lot , greetings

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Day 4 of 30 WC

Hi everyone ,

Today is the only day of the week that I do not have an exchange, so today is my day off 😁 .

Today I was watching old videos of boxing , I like to watch it because we have many champions of the world (1), like Erick " El Terrible " Morales , Marco Antonio Barrera, Juan Manuel " Dinamita " Marquez and the best, Julio Cesar Chavez

I enjoy watching these old fights because they were very exciting. When I see them getting hit and despite of that they keep going 😀it is awesome. They were brave people , because sometimes they were losing their fights and they overlapped ,

Sometimes I watch the same fight many times , just to realize how it was, you know, how were the punches, how many times they fell , if they almost fell etc.

I think that the most exciting fight was Julio Cesar Chavez vs Meldrick Taylor. Chavez was losing the fight because Taylor was very fast and Chavez had received a lot of punches , but Chavez had an iron heart and nobody had defeated him. In the last round Chavez went out for him ,the whole country was watching the fight and , in the last seconds with only twenty seconds left, Chavez punched him and knocked him down and won the fight. Chavez remained undefeated, he is the greatest Idol of boxing in México.

Thanks a lot , greetings

1- No tiene sentido, tal vez, Mexico has produced many boxing champions

Well done.... try using less commas, shorter sentences.


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Hi Miguel,

Nice effort and a great story of why you love boxing :)
My advice is to keep your sentences short and not try to extend them using commas, ",".

My corrections below :


Day 4 of 30 WC

Hi everyone ,

Today is the only day of the week that I do have not any exchanges , so I'm taking the day off 😁 .

Today I was watching old boxing videos. I like to watch them because where I'm from, we have many world champions , like Erick " El Terrible " Morales , Marco Antonio Barrera, Juan Manuel " Dinamita " Marquez and the best, Julio Cesar Chavez

I enjoy watching these old fights because they are very exciting! Despite them getting hit over and over again, they keep going! 😀 It's so awesome. They were very brave people because sometimes, they seemed to be losing their fights but they overcame their opponent in the end and won!

Sometimes I would watch the same fight many times, just to understand how it felt like to be in the ring. How they punched, how many times they fell or almost fell, you know?

I think that the most exciting fight was the one between Julio Cesar Chavez and Meldrick Taylor. Chavez was losing the fight because Taylor was very fast and Chavez had received a lot of punches. However, Chavez had a strong heart and he was undefeated before. In the last round, Chavez went all out and as whole country was watching, Chavez managed to deliver the KO punch to Taylorduring the last 20 seconds of the round.

Chavez continued his streak as the undefeated champion and became the greatest boxing idol in Mexico.

Thanks for reading

Miguel.
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Day 4 of 30 WC

Hi everyone ,

Today is the only day of the week that I have not exchanges , so today is my day off 😁 .

Today I was watching old videos of boxing , I like to see it them because we have many champions of the world , like Erick " El Terrible " Morales , Marco Antonio Barrera, Juan Manuel " Dinamita " Marquez and the best : Julio Cesar Chavez

I enjoy watching these olds fights because were very exciting exaiting , when I see them getting hits and despite of that they keep going 😀it is awesome; they were brave braves people , because sometimes they were losing their fights and they overlapped ,

Sometimes I watch the same fight many times , just to realize how it was ,was it you know, how was were the punches, how many times they fell , if they almost fell etc.

I think that the must exaiting exciting fight was Julio Cesar Chavez vs Meldrick Taylor , Chavez was losing the fight because Taylor was very fast and Chavez had received a lot of punches , but Chavez had a iron heart and nobody had defeated him , and in the last round Chavez went out for him ,the whole country was watching the fight and , in the last seconds when was missing in less than twenty seconds , Chavez punched him and knocked him down and won the fight , Chavez continued unbeaten, he is the greatest Idol of boxing of México.

Thanks a lot , greetings
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Hola Mumtaz 😀 Gracias por la sugerencia , la voy a buscar para verla, 😀👍🏻
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“Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee. The hands can’t hit what the eyes can’t see.” Muhammad Ali 💚 Since you are into sports, Miguel, and now that you wrote about boxing, here’s a recommendation of a movie about boxing that I really liked: https://m.imdb.com/title/tt0352248/ Luckily you get to see Renée Zellweger before her weird face operation that she says she didn’t do 😂

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