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My first day of school - 30-Days English Challenge - 1 first day Hi please help me with my grammar, I will be grateful with you! My first day of school. When I was 13, I changed of school, I started in one new school, it was farther than my old school, but I was nervous and excited to know it, especially I was excited because I was going to see one friend that I told him where I was going to study in Summer when he asked me. Suddenly in September he told me that he also was going to be in the same school than me, I was so happy, then my first day of school was great because I saw him and I gave him a very huge hug in front of all my new classmates, (that is one of the best hugs that I have had :)) Then they thought, this girl is new, how did she know this boy? I was so happy because I was going to study with my friend of my old school in the same section. But it happened after I got to another classroom then I asked a boy, that was in the door, where was my section and he told me in the 1 first floor, I would have not imagined that this boy would become my future best friend. Then, I arrived to my classroom, and my class started, suddenly the coordinator arrived and removed the list of the section and changed it, it had changes of people, one person asked to be in that section, and they changed me for that person!!!!!!!! I was so sad and scared!!!!! When I went to my new section my classmates were different, in the first day some were rude with me, themselves fought in class, and the teacher of my new section gave me one incorrect book different than my classmates and I was lost during the class, then my activity was bad!! I saw everything gray! Hahahahaha! Now it is funny, but that day I felt so bad! My wonderful first day became in one terrible first day of class!

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My first day of school - 30-Days English Challenge - 1 first day

Hi, please help me with my grammar, I will be grateful with you I would be very grateful!

My first day of school.

When I was 13, I changed of schools. I started in one at a new school. It was farther further than my old school, but I was nervous and excited to know it start. I was especially I was excited because I was going to see one a friend that I told him where I was going to study in Summer when he asked me whom I told that I was going to be studying there in the summer. Suddenly in September he told me that he was also was going to be in the same school than as me. I was so happy. Then my first day of school was great because I saw him and I gave him a very huge hug in front of all my new classmates (that is was one of the best hugs that I have ever had :)). Then they everyone thought, "this girl is new, how did she know this boy?" I was so happy because I was going to study with my friend of from my old school in the same section.

But it But this happened after I got to another classroom: then I asked a boy that was in the door where was my section where my section was and he told me in the 1 first floor. I would have not imagined not have imagined that this boy would become my future best friend. Then, I arrived to my classroom, and my class started. Suddenly the coordinator arrived and removed the list of the section and changed it, it had changes of people including the list of people! One person asked to be in that section, and they changed me for that person!!! I was so sad and scared!!! When I went to my new section, my classmates were different. In the first day some were rude with me, themselves they fought in class, and the teacher of my new section gave me one incorrect book different a different book to what my classmates had, than my classmates and so I was lost during the class. Then my activity was went badly! I saw everything in gray! grey! Hahahahaha! Now it is funny, but that day I felt so bad! My wonderful first day became in one turned into a terrible first day of class!

Thanks for sharing Marly. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections. :-)
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My first day of school - 30-Days English Challenge - 1 first day

Hi please help me with my grammar, I will be grateful with you!

My first day of school.
When I was 13, I changed of school, I started in one a new one school, it was farther than my old school, but I was nervous and excited to know how was it like, especially I was excited because I was going to see one a friend that I have told him where I was going to study at in Summer when he asked me. Suddenly, in September, he told me that he was also was going to be in the same school than me as I. I was so happy, and then my first day of school was great because I saw him and I gave him a very huge hug in front of all my new classmates, (that is was one of the best hugs that I have ever had :)) Then they thought: " this girl is new here, how did she know this boy?" I was so happy because I was going to study with my friend of from my old school in the same section. class?
But it this happened after I got went to another classroom then I asked a boy, that who was in the door, where was my section was and he told me in the 1 first floor, I would have not imagined that this boy would become my future best friend. Then, I arrived to at my classroom, and my class started, suddenly the coordinator arrived and removed the list of the section and changed it, it had changes of people, one person asked to be in that section, and they changed me for that person!!!!!!!! I was so sad and scared!!!!! When I went to my new section my classmates were different, in the first day some of them were rude with me, themselves they fought in class, and the teacher of my new section gave me one incorrect an incorrect book, a different than from my classmates and I was lost during the class, then my activity was bad!! I saw everything gray! Hahahahaha! Now it is funny, but that day I felt so bad! My wonderful first day became in one turned into a terrible one first day of class!
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My first day of school - 30-Days English Challenge - 1 first day

Hi please help me with my grammar, I will be grateful with to you!

My first day of school.
When I was 13, I changed of schools, I started in one a new school, it was farther than my old school, but I was nervous and excited to know it. especially I was especially excited because I was going to see one friend that whom I told him where I was going to study in Summer when he asked me. Suddenly in September he told me that he also was going to be in the same school than as me, I was so happy, then my first day of school was great because I saw him and I gave him a very huge hug in front of all my new classmates, (that is one of the best hugs that I have had :)) Then they thought, this girl is new, how did she know this boy? I was so happy because I was going to study with my friend of from my old school in the same section class.
But it happened after I got to another classroom then I asked a boy, that who was in at the door, where was my section class and he told me in the 1 first floor, I would have not imagined that this boy would become my future best friend. Then, I arrived to my classroom, and my class started, suddenly the coordinator teacher (or instructor) arrived and removed the list of the section and changed it the roster. it had changes of people, one person asked to be in that section, and they changed me for that person!!!!!!!! I was so sad and scared!!!!! When I went to my new section class my classmates were different, in the first day some were rude with me, themselves fought in class, and the teacher of my new section gave me one incorrect book different than my classmates and I was lost during the class, then my activity was bad!! I saw everything gray! Hahahahaha! Now it is funny, but that day I felt so bad! My wonderful first day became in turned into one terrible first day of class!

Good job! You have some mistakes, but the important thing is that I can understand what you mean to say despite the errors. Keep up the good work!

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