Afzal Hossain
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Age was increasing a little bit. Afzal Hossain understood his own physical disability. There was an uncertain future ahead of the eyes. He was associated with his father's death. However, Afzal has pushed these obstacles. He is now a successful businessman who has learned his studies. Afzal Hossain's house is in Patrai village of Karma union in Kulaura upazila of Moulvibazar. He is the son of the late Abdul Latif of that village. Since birth, Afzal's two hands are much smaller than normal. The fingers of the hand are also curved.
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Afzal Hossain
Plz check this passage and tell if there is any mistakes or not...
He was getting a little older. Afzal Hossain understood his own physical disability. There was an uncertain future ahead of him. He was associated with his father's death. However, Afzal has pushed past (or overcome) these obstacles. He is now a successful businessman who has learned a lot from his studies. Afzal Hossain's house is in Patrai village of Karma Union in Kulaura Upazila of Moulvibazar. He is the son of the late Abdul Latif of that village. Since birth, Afzal's two hands have been much smaller than normal. His fingers are also curved.
Good job, I have some questions:
When you say associated, do you mean "blamed for"?
Also, if he is no longer associated with his father's death, you can use the past perfect.
He had been blamed for his father's death.
Since
Since + perfect tense
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