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A positive moment in my life A positive moment in my life was when my children were born. I have 2 children. A 12 year old boy and a 15 year old teenager. So a long time has passed since this moment, but I remember it as if it were yesterday. The day when my daughter was born, I was very nervous. She was my first son child. Although the pregnancy was went very well, always you are afraid the first time. It was a little complicated because I spent a lot of time giving birth but it was over when I first saw her chubby little face. Fortunately, during my second pregnancy, 12 years ago, I was able to enjoy it more, because I knew what to expect already had experience. But seeing my son at birth was as amazing as the first time. Ever since my children were born, my life has never been the same. I feel a profound sense of love and obligation in my life.

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Positive moments in my life (since you're referring to two births)

Two positive moments in my life were when my children were born.
I have 2 children. A 12 year old boy and a 15 year old teenage girl.
So much time has passed since this moment, but I remember it as if it were yesterday.
The day when my daughter was born, I was very nervous. She was my first son child. Although the pregnancy was went very well, always you are always afraid the first time.
It was a little complicated because I spent a lot of time giving birth took a long time, but the stress (anxiety/uncertainty/...) was over when I first saw her chubby little face.
Fortunately, during my second pregnancy, 12 years ago, I was able to enjoy it more, because I knew what to expect, already had experience. But seeing my son at birth was as amazing as the first time.
Ever since my children were born, my life has never been the same. I feel a profound sense of love and purpose ('obligation' to me has a somewhat negative connotation here) in my life.
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A positive moment in my life A positive moment in my life was when my children were born. I have 2 children. A 12 year old boy and a 15 year old daughter. Although a long time has passed since that moment, I remember it as if it were yesterday. The day when my daughter was born, I was very nervous. She was my first born child. Although the pregnancy went very well, you are always afraid the first time. It was a little complicated because I spent a lot of time giving birth but it was worth it when I first saw her chubby little face. Fortunately, during my second pregnancy, 12 years ago, I was able to enjoy it more, because I knew what to expect already having had the experience. But seeing my son at birth was just as amazing as the first time. Ever since my children were born, my life has never been the same. I feel a profound sense of love and obligation in my life.
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