English writing practice (6 July)
1. He gave his tenants 50% discount for rent during the coronavirus outbreak period.
2. The generational difference creates a lot of problems in Chinese families.
3. Don't live as a conformer, you should be yourself.
4. Her lifestyle is precisely what I want to live in 5 years.
5. A short but powerful title is better than a long but be truncated one.
My English writing practice for 6th July.
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English writing practice (6 July)
1. He gave his tenants 50% discount for rent during the coronavirus outbreak period.
2. The generational difference gap creates a lot of problems in Chinese families.
3. Don't live as a conformer conformist, you should be yourself.
4. Her lifestyle is precisely what how I want to live in 5 years.
5. A short but powerful title is better than a long but be truncated mundane? boring? one.
My English writing practice for 6th July.
Thanks for your kind help.
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Someone already corrected most of your sentences, so I will just do the first!
English writing practice (6 July)
1. He gave his tenants a 50% discount for on rent during the coronavirus outbreak period.
"On" is a little better than "for" when talking about a discount. "For" implies they are using the saved money on something. Like "I will give you a discount on rent, for you to pay your family's grocery bill."
I would give you a money FOR something, I would give you a discount ON something.
"Coronavirus outbreak period" is a little long-winded. It is not incorrect, but you could shorten it and sound more natural by just saying "during the coronavirus outbreak".
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