The Power of Music (8)
Music has magic power. That power creates a virtual world where we make friends who understand you and comfort anytime and anywhere.
Human being needs music. If the world loss music, seems so quiet. Music is a sort of language, not only it can show us thought, but provides pleasant melody making us happy or relaxed. Music can express some secret emotions. Classical music owns charming power no matter when time pass by.
When I am tired, I listen light music; when I feel depressed, I listen rock or happy music; when I lost sleep, I listen white noise… How many type of music are! Music is a great invention.
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The Power of Music (8)
Music has a magic power. That power creates a virtual world where we make friends who understand you us and comfort us anytime and anywhere.
Human beings needs music. If the world loss music, seems so quiet. --> If there were no music in the world, it would be so quiet. Music is a sort of language, not only it can show us thought, but provides pleasant melody making us happy or relaxed.
2 ways:
- Not only can it express our thoughts, but it also provides.... (more formal)
- It can not only express our thoughts, but it can also... (more commonly used)
Music can express some secret emotions. Classical music owns charming power no matter when time pass by.<-- I am not sure what you mean here.
When I am tired, I listen to light music; when I feel depressed, I listen to rock or happy music; when I lost can't sleep, I listen to white noise… How many types of music there are! (Better: There are so many types of music out there!) Music is a great invention.
#30 days writing challenge-8#
It's a beautiful reflection on the meaning of music. ^_^ Well done for keeping up the challenge, 加油!
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The Power of Music (8)
Music has a magic power. That power creates a virtual world where we make friends who understand you and comfort you anytime and anywhere.
Human being needs music. If the world loss lost music, it would seems so quiet. Music is a sort of language, not only can it can show us thought, but provides pleasant melody making us happy or relaxed. Music can express some secret emotions. Classical music owns charming power no matter when time passes by.
When I am tired, I listen to light music; when I feel depressed, I listen to rock or happy music; when I lost lose sleep, I listen to white noise… How many types of music are! Music is a great invention.
#30 days writing challenge-8#
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