I've done paraphrase for my homework . Could you please check immidiately? Thank you
Most dental patients undergo ongoing anticoagulant treatment to avoid thromboembolism from prosthetic heart valves, dysrhythmias, strokes, deep venous thrombi, and myocardial infarctions. Latest recommendations prescribe that any of these patients undergo mild dental surgery done without modification or removal of their anticoagulant treatment. The most common standardized method for determining anticoagulant treatment and forecasting the efficacy of dental surgery is the Universal Standardized Ratio (INR). Reports suggest that INR values less than or equal to 3.0 3.5 or 4.0 are appropriate prior to minor dental surgery
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I've done some paraphrasing for my homework . Could you please check it immediately? Thank you.
Most(?) dental patients undergo ongoing anticoagulant treatment to avoid thromboembolism from prosthetic heart valves, dysrhythmias, strokes, deep venous thrombi, and myocardial infarctions. The latest recommendations prescribe that many of these patients undergoing mild dental surgery can do so without modification or removal of their anticoagulant treatment. The most common standardized method for determining anticoagulant treatment and forecasting the efficacy of dental surgery is the Universal Standardized Ratio (INR). Reports suggest that INR values less than or equal to 3.0 3.5 or 4.0 are appropriate prior to minor dental surgery.
Merhaba Merve, really good!
Paraphrase is a verb, so we need to use the activity, paraphrasing.
"Most" patients??? Possibly sounds like they are all unhealthy. To make it sound more like the main reason they have treatment, we could rephrase it: "Dental patients who undergo ongoing anticoagulant treatment is usually to avoid..."
"Thromboembolism" - it's the first time of heard that. I'm not a doctor, but I've seen thrombosis - a clot forming in a vein; and embolism - a clot that has broken up and moved to a different part of the body. Maybe you want to check that.
Many, or all, of the patients undergoing surgery?
Apart from that, you write really well. Keep practicing! Simon.
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I've done paraphrase for my homework . Could you please check immediately? Thank you
Most dental patients undergo ongoing anticoagulant treatment to avoid thromboembolism from prosthetic heart valves, dysrhythmias, strokes, deep venous thrombi, and myocardial infarctions. The latest recommendations prescribe that any of these patients undergo mild dental surgery done without modification or removal of their anticoagulant treatment. The most common standardized method for determining anticoagulant treatment and forecasting the efficacy of dental surgery is the Universal Standardized Ratio (INR). Reports suggest that INR values less than or equal to 3.0 3.5 or 4.0 are appropriate prior to minor dental surgery
Well done
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