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Hi everyone,
My name is Nathiely, born and raised in Mexico City. I've been interested in foreigner language since I was a little girl, at the age of 7 my greatest dream was to move to Paris and have a French lover lol, as if that were not enough I planned to travel the world and live across the 7 continents.
Then life happens but I didn't want to give up on my childhood dreams, so I made the decision to get a summer job and save some money to enroll me in language courses. Back in time, a 20-year-old girl attended her first English language class. it hasn't been a straightforward journey, but I managed to live in 7 countries and traveled across 5 continents, in order to explore and understand different cultures and taste local street food.
Btw I've not accomplished my goal of living in the city of love yet, but I was close enough last year living in the city of wine (Bordeaux).
Right now I'm living in the US, so I wish I could have a better command of the English language.
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Can you help to correct my text please :)?
Hi everyone,
My name is Nathiely, born and raised in Mexico City. I've been interested in foreigner languages since I was a little girl. At the age of seven, my greatest dream was to move to Paris and have a French lover, lol. As if that were not enough, I planned to travel the world and live across the seven continents.
Then life happened, but I didn't want to give up on my childhood dreams, so I made the decision to get a summer job and save some money to enroll myself in language courses. Back in Some time ago, a 20-year-old girl attended her first English language class. It hasn't been a straightforward journey, but I have managed to live in seven countries and travelled across five continents, in order to explore and understand different cultures and taste local street food.
Btw, I've not accomplished my goal of living in the City of Love (I think Paris is called the City of Lights) yet, but I was close enough last year living in the City of Wine (Bordeaux).
Right now I'm living in the US, so I wish I could have a better command of the English language.
Hola Nathiely, no está mal.
Entiendo que el tono o estilo es muy de entre amigos, pero cuidado si quieres hacer un examen - hay que escribir los números y eso de LOL, ¡el profesor no va a reir!
Some time ago - hace tiempo.
Aparte de eso, bien hecho. Saludos desde España. Simón.
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Can you help to correct my text please :)?
Hi everyone,
My name is Nathiely, born and raised in Mexico City. I've been interested in foreign languages since I was a little girl. At the age of 7 my greatest dream was to move to Paris and have a French lover (lol) . As if that were not enough I planned to travel the world and live across the 7 continents.
Then life happens, but I didn't want to give up on my childhood dreams. So I made the decision to get a summer job and save some money to enroll myself in language courses. Back then, a 20-year-old girl attended her first English language class. It hasn't been a straightforward journey, but I have managed to live in 7 countries and travel across 5 continents in order to explore and understand different cultures and taste local street food.
Btw I've not accomplished my goal of living in the city of love yet, but I was close enough last year living in the city of wine (Bordeaux).
Right now I'm living in the US, so I wish I could have a better command of the English language.
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Can you help to correct my text please :)?
Hi everyone,
My name is Nathiely, born and raised in Mexico City. I've been interested in foreigner language since I was a little girl, at the age of 7 my greatest dream was to move to Paris and have a French lover lol, as if that were not enough I planned to travel the world and live across the 7 continents.
Then life happens but I didn't want to give up on my childhood dreams, so I made the decision to get a summer job and save some money to enroll me in language courses. Back in time, a 20-year-old girl attended her first English language class. it hasn't been a straightforward journey, but I managed to live in 7 countries and traveled across 5 continents, in order to explore and understand different cultures and taste local street food.
Btw I've not accomplished my goal of living in the city of love yet, but I was close enough last year living in the city of wine (Bordeaux).
Right now I'm living in the US, so I wish I could have a better command of the English language.
Good work in general Nathiely, nicely done. Sounds as if you lead an interesting life. I am learning French and Italian and share some of your dreams. Bonne chance!
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