30-days writing challenge/Day 2 (The asylum seeker)
On social media I came across a horrible story. It’s about a Chechen asylum seeker in Germany. He used to criticize the regime in Chechenia for restricting general freedom and chasing any opposition side. One morning, Tumsu woke up on a heavy beating on his head with a hammer. Luckily, he didn’t fainted but instead he jumped and resisted the assailant. He managed to capture the hammer and severely beaten him. Later, he called the police and they attended in the place of that incident. They arrested both of them but after investigating the issue, Tumsu was freed and the other man was kept in jail after confessing that he was sent by someone of a high position in power in Chechenia. Tumsu took photos of the scars on his neck and shared them on his instagram account. He also filmed a short video where he winked and referred to the man who sent to kill him in his post.
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30-days writing challenge/Day 2 (The asylum seeker)
On social media I came across a horrible story. It’s about a Chechen asylum seeker in Germany. He used to criticize the regime in Chechenia for restricting general freedom and chasing removing any opposition side. One morning, Tumsu wokeup on a was awakened by a heavy beating on his head with a hammer. Luckily, he didn’t faintned but instead he jumped up and resisted the assailant. He managed to capture the hammer and severely beaten him. Later, he called the police and they attended in the place of that the incident. They arrested both of them but after investigating the issue, Tumsu was freed and the other man was kept in jail after confessing that he was sent by someone of in a high position in of power in Chechnya. Tumsu took photos of the scars on his neck and shared them on his instagram account. He also filmed a short video where he winked and referred to the man who was sent to kill him in his post.
In his post he also added a short video where he winked and referred to the man who was sent to kill him. (This would sound better)
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Thanks @Barbara.
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Hi nada, can you edit the spreadsheet or do you prefer me to do it for you?
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