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An eccentric man There is a appearance in my town. He always dresses in a nice suit and holds a crush. He has been a soldier during the World War II. Because the suffering of war that he lost his wife and daughter. The local government gives him an extravagant flat as compensation for his sacrifices. His behaviors like an eccentric person. He always goes to church and communities with preacher about The Bible and God. When he fells something to counter his belief, he will act fiery tempers. Someone told me that his flat is decorated by some eccentric pictures. Such as a dead deer, naked women, extraterrestrial. He has neighbor quarrels all the time as his neighbor always parks in front of his goodly garden. He puts up strange notices to Pass-by in his garden. No one knows about that. Except for, he addicts to politician's speeches. He often stands for parliament and gives a speeches saying that he would do if he were Prime Minister. The speeches contains medical system innovation and financial plan. To our surprise, he never votes any politicians. He said that a few Prime Ministers in the history can do better than he does. People in poverty always talk with him, on the contary, the rich hardly salute him. Most of us in town think that he is an eccentric man. In general, he is kind and gentle for us and also a loveable eccentric in our town.

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An eccentric man

There is a appearance in my town. He always dresses in a nice suit and holds a crush. (<---- What do you mean by 'crush'?)


He has been a soldier during the World War II. Because the suffering of war that he lost his wife and daughter. The local government gives him an extravagant flat as compensation for his sacrifices. His behaviors like an eccentric person. He always goes to church and communities with preacher about The Bible and God. When he fells something to counter his belief, he will act fiery tempers. Someone told me that his flat is decorated by some eccentric pictures. Such as a dead deer, naked women, extraterrestrial. He has neighbor quarrels all the time as his neighbor always parks in front of his goodly garden. He puts up strange notices to Pass-by in his garden. No one knows about that. Except for, he addicts to politician's speeches. He often stands for parliament and gives a speeches saying that he would do if he were Prime Minister. The speeches contains medical system innovation and financial plan. To our surprise, he never votes any politicians. He said that a few Prime Ministers in the history can do better than he does. People in poverty always talk with him, on the contary, the rich hardly salute him. Most of us in town think that he is an eccentric man. In general, he is kind and gentle for us and also a loveable eccentric in our town.

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