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Please, check my story for errors, please Hi! My name is Dobby, I was a house elf. Today I will talk about my happiest day: the day when Harry Potter set me free and I became a free elf! It was on May 29, 1993. My former Master got word that the Professor Dumbledore was back at Hogwarts. And I decided to deal with it. He sent me to Hogwarts. I saw how Harry and the company went into the office and began to eavesdrop on what they would talk about. I heard joyful exclamations (apparently, it was Ginny's parents), and then Harry Potter told how he defeated the Basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets and that He Who Must Not Be Named was to blame for everything. After that, Professor Dumbledore sent Ginny to the hospital wing, had fun that Gilderoy Lockhart had lost his memory, and also sent him to the hospital wing. Left alone with the Headmaster , Harry shared his fears that he had a resemblance to Voldemort and that the Sorting Hat sent him to Slytherin. Professor Dumbledore, this wise man, gave very important advice: It's our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities. After that, I tried to hear something else, but then my master appeared, Lucius Malfoy and dragged me into the office. While the hosts were cursing with Professor Dumbledore, I tried my best to tell Harry Potter where this diary came from. He seems to understand. After an unsuccessful conversation, my master left the office and began to beat me, but then Harry Potter appeared and put something in the hands of my master. And then ... The ... Master has given Dobby a sock! Dobby is free! For this reason, Lucius Malfoy tried to attack Harry Potter, but I defended him! And he promised never again to save the life of Harry Potter!

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Please check my story for errors. Thanks.

Hi! My name is Dobby, I was a house elf.
Today I will talk about my happiest day: the day when Harry Potter set me free and I became a free elf!
It was on May 29, 1993. My former Master got word that Professor Dumbledore was back at Hogwarts. And I decided to deal with it. He sent me to Hogwarts. I saw how Harry and Company went into the office and began to eavesdrop on what they would later talk about.
I heard joyful exclamations (apparently from Ginny's parents), and then Harry Potter told how he defeated the Basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets and that He Who Must Not Be Named was to blame for everything.
After that, Professor Dumbledore sent Ginny to the hospital wing, had fun over Gilderoy Lockhart losing his memory, and also sent him to the hospital wing.
Left alone with the Headmaster, Harry shared his fears that he resembled Voldemort and that the Sorting Hat sent him to Slytherin. Professor Dumbledore the Wise gave this very important advice: "It's our choices, Harry, that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities".
After that, I tried to hear something else, but then my master, Lucius Malfoy, appeared and dragged me into the office. While the hosts were cursing with Professor Dumbledore, I tried my best to tell Harry Potter where this diary came from.
He seemed to understand.
After an unsuccessful conversation, my master left the office and began to beat me, but then Harry Potter appeared and put something in the hands of my master.
And then ... The ... Master gave Dobby a shock! Dobby is free! For this reason, Lucius Malfoy tried to attack Harry Potter, but I defended him! And he promised never again to save the life of Harry Potter!

I knew nothing of Potter but yours is a very well-written piece of traditional story-telling.
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I love the way you narrate <3
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It's perfect!
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Vi quando Harry e a esposa entraram no escritório,

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