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When I feel lonely(please check my sentence) Everyone feel lonely from time to time. I am no exception. Sometimes, I feel lonely when I stay home alone because I likes to talk to other people. It is so quiet that I can only hear the sound of the clock. No one can talk to me, I cannot bear it at all. It almost drives me crazy.In order to overcome the loneliness ,I need to find something worthwhile to do. The best solution for me is to read a novel.It can transfer my attention from loneliness to the stories of others.l was immersed myself in the imaginations, When I noticed the time, an afternoon slipped away. It helps me drive the loneliness away when I stay home alone. It is the best recreation for me to turn the lonely time into happy time.

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Everyone feels lonely from time to time, I am no exception. I like to talk to other people but sometimes, I feel lonely when I stay at home alone. It is so quiet that I can only hear the sound of the clock. No one can talk to me, I cannot bear it at all. It almost drives me crazy.

To overcome loneliness, I need to find something worthwhile to do. The best solution for me is to read a novel. Reading shifts my attention to the stories of others. I immerse my imaginations and time slips by. It is the best recreation for me to turn the lonely time into happy time.
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When I feel lonely (please check my sentences)

Everyone feels lonely from time to time. I am no exception. Sometimes I feel lonely when I stay home alone because I like to talk to other people. It is so quiet that I can only hear the sound of the clock. No one can talk to me and I cannot bear it at all. It almost drives me crazy. In order to overcome the loneliness ,I need to find something worthwhile to do.
The best solution for me is to read a novel. It can transfer my attention from loneliness to the story of others. l immersed myself in imagination and
when I noticed the time, an afternoon had slipped away.
It helps me drive the loneliness away when I stay home alone. It is the best pastime for me to turn a lonely time into a happy one.

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