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With the development of science and techology , many kinds of things have been reserched by scientists.Recently ,one reserarch shows that characteristics we are born with have much more impression on our personality and development than any esperirnces we may have in our life,But does real life events can't change our ways to face the world?Many cases give us a positive answer---yes ,we can change our personality by experiences.
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With the development of science and technology, many kinds of things (?) have been researched (discovered) by scientists. Recently, one research showed that characteristics we are born with; have much more impression on our personality [and development] than any experiences we may have in our life, But do events in the real life can change our ways of facing the world? Many cases give us a positive answer---yes, we can change our personality by experiences.
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Mohsen
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