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The good bad day Hello everyone, today I am writing about today. Today, I don’t know what I can write about today. Today it is the day for my lucky and unlucky. Yesterday is 25th of June. Today my dad will come home, when I go home, my family will go to buy everything to cook. And my grandma will go to work on the field because she was a farmer. And I don’t have a key to go in to the house and I will stand out of the house. It very hot because the sun will very big. I will wait for 30 minutes because my grandma will lost her key. But usually, I can go inside the house. But it will be very lucky when my family come home. They will buy a lot of things. When we go in the house, my mother said, today your dad will come home and he will take you to swim in the new swimming pool. We very happy. Next, in the afternoon, it will unlucky again. In the afternoon, my mother will go to work, and my dad will stay at home to call me wake up. He make me up very late. And I go go very fast to the school to play badminton. When I come home, I will go to swim with my friends. It will be a very good and bad day. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.

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The good bad day

Hello everyone, today I am writing about today. Today, I don’t know what I can write about. Today is a day for my lucky and unlucky. Yesterday was the 25th of June. Today my dad will come home, and when I get home, my family will go out to buy things to cook. My grandma will go work in the field because she is a farmer. I don’t have a key to get into the house so I will stand outside the house. It is very hot because the sun is bright. I wait for 30 minutes because my grandma will lost her key. Usually, I can go inside the house (since she does not lose her key). It will be very lucky when my family comes home. They will buy a lot of things. When we go in the house, my mother said "today your dad will come home and take you to swim in the new swimming pool". We are very happy. Next, in the afternoon, it becomes unlucky again. In the afternoon, my mother will go to work, and my dad will stay at home to wake me up. He wakes me up very late. And I go very fast to the school to play badminton. When I come home, I go to swim with my friends. It has been a very good and bad day. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.

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