Diary Entry - 2020.06.24
Hi, please can I ask that you only correct if what I have written is WRONG, not if you think a native speaker would say it better etc, as I am only a beginner, i’m not looking for perfection! Thanks.
你好
我每天想写汉字。我喜欢汉语。今天我会写关于我的家。
我的家有一个房间。它很小但是我喜欢。有一个椅子和一张桌子。这些是白色的。现在被子在桌子上。我喜欢喝水，我不喝酒，咖啡，茶。。
现在晚上，我很累。我会去我的床，因为我想睡觉。。
晚安。
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i am going to my bed → 我会去睡觉。（if you translate word by word, it looks like 我会去我的床。）
现在杯子在桌子上。（“被子” is quilt）
现在晚上 → 现在“是”晚上
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你好
我每天想写汉字。我喜欢汉语。今天我会写关于我的家。
我的家有一个房间。它很小但是我喜欢。有一个椅子和一张桌子。这些是白色的。现在被子在桌子上。我喜欢喝水，我不喝酒，咖啡，茶。。
晚安。
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Thanks so much Lily!
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We would say "我会躺在床上" instead of "我会去我的床" . It's not a correct expression in Chinese.
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