My day today
Today was the first day I left since May, I felt amazing like I was leaving my own jail. I went to the ATM and the supermarket, it took me about three hours buy some vegetables and the rest of the food, I had to walk until arrive there, the weather was so hot (about 38°C), I was sweating a lot.
I really want all this end, I feel so sad. Where are the scientists?
I am practicing my writing*
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My day today
Today was the first day I left since May.
I felt amazing like I was leaving my own jail.
I went to the ATM and the supermarket.
It took me about three hours to buy some vegetables and the rest of the food.
I had to walk until arrive to get there.
The weather was so hot (about 38°C), I was sweating a lot.
I really want all this end, I feel so sad. Where are the scientists?
¡Buen trabajo, amigo!
I am practicing my writing*
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Left where since may? This isn't clear. Took me 3 hours to buy some vegetables and the rest of the food. (fullstop no need for comma here). Arrived not arrive, past tense.
Other than this it is all good :)
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