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Help me correct it. Many thanks! I still remember the last day of my new employee orientation training , everyone was excited and was looking forward to our new career life. Our class teacher ,Mr Ye, gave us some suggestions at the end of class. He told us ‘You will face many things in your future. If your don’t know how to do, just obey the rules. If it couldn’t be found in the rules, you should follow your heart and wouldn’t regret after doing it.’ If I face the moral dilemma, I will firstly analyze different situations and list the different combinations of choices I have at hand. Then I would examine and display the advantages and disadvantages of each choice to weigh their pros and cons. In this process, I can have a view as holistic as possible of the problem. This information might include the direct effect of the choice as well as the long-term implication with the current trends. As such, I can weigh up the cost and benefits to reach a decision that can maximize the benefits gained both at present and the long run. For example, if i found one of my friends cheating, I would ask the reason. If it’s a while lie and would not have any negative impact, I would forgive my friend. But If my friend cheat on purpose and impair others, I would ask my friend to stop and remedy the situation. I have a fear of heights. Last year, I had a team building, one of activities required one team member jump from a high place with no safe belts and other team members would caught you. I tried my best but finally I failed to do it. If I could change one thing of myself, I hope I wouldn’t be afraid of heights anymore.

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I still remember the last day of my new employee orientation training. Everyone was excited and was looking forward to our new career life. Our class teacher ,Mr Ye, gave us some suggestions at the end of class. He told us ‘You will face many things in your future. If your don’t know what how to do, just obey the rules. If it's not covered by the rules couldn’t be found in the rules, you should follow your heart and you won't wouldn’t regret after doing it afterwards.’
If I face a the moral dilemma, I will firstly first analyze different situations and list the different combinations of choices I have at hand. Then I would examine and display set out the advantages and disadvantages of each choice to weigh their pros and cons. In this process, I can will have as holistic a view of the problem as possible view as holistic as possible of the problem. This information might include the direct effect immediate impact of the choice as well as the long-term implication with the in the light of current trends. As such, I can weigh up the cost and benefits to reach a decision that can maximize the benefits gained, both now at present and in the long run.
For example, if i found one of my friends cheating, I would ask them why the reason. If it’s a white lie and would not have any negative impact, I would forgive my friend. But If my friend were to cheat on purpose and impair harm others, I would ask my friend to stop and remedy the situation.

I have a fear of heights. Last year, I had a team building session., One of activities required one team member to jump from a high place with no safety belts and other team members would caught catch you. I tried my best but finally in the end, I failed to couldn't do it. If I could change one thing of myself, I'd wish hope I wouldn’t be wasn't afraid of heights anymore.

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