My hobbies
I have three hobbies.The first one is travling,I like to go to the island,because I love beach,sea and sailing.The second is painting,it gives me happy.The third hobby is cycling,when you ride a bike,you can feel free.
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My hobbies
I have three hobbies. The first one is traveling, I like to go to the island, because I love the beach, the sea and sailing. The second is painting, it gives makes me happy. The third hobby is cycling, when you ride a bike you can feel free.
This reads well Amy, but there are a couple of things to look out for:
- You should always put a space after a comma and fullstop/period.
- when you talk generally about something you need a definite article. Not "beach", but "the beach".
- In English things do not "give you happy", they "make you happy". For example: "when I won the competition it made me happy".
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My hobbies
I have three hobbies.The first one is travling traveling. I like to go to the island because I love beaches, sea and sailing.The second one is painting. It gives me happy happiness. The third hobby is cycling. When you ride a bike, you can feel free.
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Thank you very much!
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Hi Amy! Hope you're doing good. I made a few corrections. Let me know if you need any more help regarding any topic.
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