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Hi. I'm trying to pratice my writing, so I'll write about a part of my day. I woke up at 8 o’clock and I was so hot! Then I took a cold shower, I worked at home (home office) for some hours until lunch time, and that’s it.

Hey Luís! This is a fun entry! I'd be happy to help you make a few corrections. I'll begin by breaking down your entry and showing you how to make corrections, then I'll re-write your entry using the corrections: Here we go:

Hi, i’m I'm trying to pratice practice my writing, so i’ll I'll write about a part of my day... Make sure you capitalize "I'm" which is a combination of the words "I am." The word "I" is the only pronoun that is capitalized and it is always capitalized.

I woke up at 8 o’clock and i I was so hot!...Again, don't forget to capitalize "I."

Then, i I taked took a cold shower..."Took" is the past tense form of "to take" and you use this tense for everyone. Example: I took, you took, he took, she took, we took, they took, it took. Also, you could combine this sentence with the one before it so that it flows better. Here's how you could do that:

Option: I woke up at 8 o'clock and I was so hot, so I took a cold shower.

i Worked (home office) I worked from my home office for some hours...Here are a few options for better word choices:

Option 1: Then, I worked from my home office for a few hours...

Option 2: Then, I worked from my home office until...

until lunch time lunchtime and that’s it.

Hi, I’m trying to practice my writing, so I'll write about a part of my day. I woke up at 8 o’clock and I was so hot, so I took a cold shower. Then, I worked from my home office for a few hours until lunchtime and that’s it.